Lost & Found Ch. 06 Pt. 01

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"Not funny, uncle Jonah, not funny at all!" she hissed, Joey meanwhile trying desperately to catch his breath as the full effect of the moonshine hit his stomach; for one dreadful moment he thought he was going to throw it up again, but after a rebellious few seconds his stomach settled down again.

"Baby, I'm sorry, I shouldn't have let him give you that, it's 180 proof, somethin' went wrong with the still and it came out like that; he keeps it to give to Jerry and Jethro when they get out of line, and it's disgustin'!" apologized Luna, while Jonah nodded admiringly; even his two brothers wouldn't knowingly touch that stuff, and they were marines, notorious for being able to drink anything that poured.

Jonah grinned placatingly at Luna, who couldn't help but smile back.

"Welcome to the family, Joey! You'll make Lu-Lu a fine husband, I know it; I've knowed you all your life, even if you-all don't remember me much, but your mama's fine folk, and so was your daddy, all your people are, and I'm pleased you love my niece. You do love her?" he asked, his voice suddenly menacing.

Joey nodded.

"Yes sir, yes I do. I've got a good job, a nice home, a little boy who's gonna to love her like I do, and a family, well, you know mom as well as I do, better, even, so you know she's gonna flip over her, what can I say?"

Jonah stood up, giving his hand to Luna as she stood up, looking apprehensively at him.

"What about Jethro and Jerry, uncle Jonah? Won't they have something to say?"

Jonah snorted derisively.

"They didn't do squat about bringin' you up, 'cause they thought being a marine was more important; shit, I thought it was important too, but so's family, and we ain't got so much we can afford to let it go, so you go, live in California, be married, and be happy, and you let me worry about them two! Best you get movin' now, you got packin' to do!"

Luna hugged her uncle, who looked surprised, then hugged her back fiercely, before letting her go.

"Go on now, time's short if you wanna catch that six o'clock flight!"

Luna gaped at him, then smiled her beautiful smile, even as two tears trickled down her cheeks.

"I'll come back and see you real soon, Uncle Jonah, I promise!" she whispered, hugging him again, then darting from the room. Joey and Jonah listened as she clattered up the stairs to her room.

"I'll look after her, I swear!" murmured Joey, and winced as Jonah squeezed his shoulder.

"I know you will, son; your mama brought you up right, I know you'll do the right thing by her. Just promise me you'll marry her proper-like, none of this hippy, five-minute, standing-in-a-stream, California, new-age poetry stuff; she wants a proper white wedding, she told me that when she was a little girl, just do that for her, and Joey, don't you ever let her cry; she ain't never had much, and she deserves better than we ever done for her, so you just make sure you make her happy. I got your word on that, right?"

Joey nodded.

"I promise you, I will never give her reason to cry; I swear I will make every day a good day for her; if she wants it, I'll find a way to give it to her, don't you worry!"

Jonah grinned.

"I know you will, and I can't ask better than that; your mama told me a lot about you, I can see she warn't just blowin' smoke, so while you're waitin', call your mama and tell her 'bout you and Lu-Lu, she's gonna want to know, for sure!"

Joey dialled Sarah's number, remembering too late it was only 7 a.m. in California, but Sarah picked up after only two rings.

"Ma, it's me, I'm coming home, I'll be there tonight!" he said, homesickness suddenly leaping large in him at the thought of seeing his son again.

He could hear the excitement in her voice as she called Steve to the phone.

"Joey, are you ready for this, are you sure?" she asked, unable to keep an edge of concern out of her voice.

"Never more sure, Ma...and I've got something to tell you; that girl I told you about, Luna, well she's coming back with me. Ma, she and I...we...both of us...she's the one, Ma, I'm sure of it. I asked her to marry me, and she said yes!"

He could hear the wonder in his mom's voice.

"Baby, are you sure, really sure about this? This is a big step, and you've got a lot of baggage; does she know what she's taking on?"

Joey paused.

"She knows about...about Karen, about Joe, she even knows about Robbie...well, some of it anyway."

Sarah sounded even more concerned now.

"So you haven't told her everything yet...about you, Robbie, and Casey, Frank, Caitlin, the whole story? These are things you have to tell her, baby; if she's really the one, then she needs to know what this family's been though, and who we are; it's not fair on her to leave that stuff out!"

Joey lowered his voice.

"Ma, I will, but I want her to meet everyone first, then she'll see for herself none of that stuff matters. It'll be fine, Ma, don't worry, she's a great girl, she'll handle it, I promise!"

In Novato, Sarah stared blankly at the 'phone, then mechanically hung up, and turned to her husband. Steve held her while she patted his back absently, gathering her thoughts.

"Penny for your thoughts..." murmured Steve, and Sarah rested her head on his shoulder.

"He's fallen in love with Jonah Hollister's niece; he's bringing her back with him, tonight!"

Steve stroked her hair.

"That's a good thing, yes? You know this Jonah well, you've told me about him, you think they're good folks, obviously so does Joey. So what's the problem? What's really going-on?"

Sarah sighed as she toyed with his shirt button.

"He hasn't told her, about Robbie and Casey, about Frank and Caitlin. He's storing up so much trouble and he thinks he can handle it, but this is no way to start out; he should have told her, he should have been completely honest! Supposing she finds out and freaks out? We've only just got him back, what would that do to him? I'm worried, baby, I'm really worried, and I'm scared; I'm scared we'll lose him for good if this all goes bad..."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love most of your stories, but as someone who lost a spouse to cancer, this chapter does not ring true. “For the first time in a very long time…” It’s been six months. Not a very long time. Joey’s not been a real father to his baby in that many months when his family tells him to leave his son for a few more months or however long it takes. He’s missing his son’s babyhood. That’s a lot of development and bonding time.

Fenris420Fenris420about 1 year ago

I guess it's a testament to your skills as a story teller that Karen's death had such an impact. It was a real 'Game of Thrones' moment that, while I can't say I approve, I do appreciate. Gone but not forgotten. RIP Karen. 5/5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Not reading anymore. Stoped at Karen died. Very poor choice. Very bad writing choice. Because now you just going for tear jerker. This had no fluidity in it. You could have Joey and Karen split up for bringing in more family loving. I was looking forward to some other stories by you but not now. Sorry. Good bye.

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 3 years ago

I agree with Anonymous below from a year ago. 100%. I’m lazy, I don’t want to rewrite it. And yeah, I was so pissed when you killed off Karen. Damn you to hell... Damn you all to hell... That was my impression of Charlton Heston. I wanted to find you, draw and quarter you (withal the cutty bits) throw your parts in a pit of hungry wolves and then beat the crap out of you with a 2 by 4 dipped in tar overnight (it will bend then), slowly. I know who Luna is... I know who Luna is... Can’t wait till Frank finds out Joey is with Luna.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
And...

I was right. Hated you the entirety of page 1. Dammit, I liked Karen. At least you didn't off Casey at the same time, or take out one of the kids. And I was also right about getting over it cause I also like Luna. Figured out who she was immediately, mainly because I didn't have to wait for chapters to be published and remembered that Sarah wasn't the only one that was set up like that by the psychotic, sorry excuse for a human being whose name I refuse to speak.

As always, very good style and tempo with very few mistakes that I could find. Good flow and nice slow burn that gave Joey the time needed to grieve and be able to accept new love into his life. Love how much of the spitfire nature Luna has showing just how much of her gramma's family line she has in her.

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