"Merry Christmas. Don't forget about me.
Love, Sheri"
I had just finished putting it away when Tommy knocked on my door, dragging me out to breakfast, and then off to the bus.
The rest of that trip was uneventful; I made it home OK, picked up some presents in Panama, saw some old friends, and made it back to college in one piece.
But I'll always recall that first Christmas away from home, and the greatest Christmas present I ever received.
Not my first erector set, or the 114 piece Lincoln Log tube. Not my first really COOL bicycle, a purple spider bike with banana seat, big handle bars and a three speed shifter on the bar. Not my first electric guitar, a Fender, and amp, which I think my parents had some second thoughts about.
No, Sheri's was the nicest gift I ever received, and probably ever will receive, for Christmas.
"Thanks" just doesn't seem to say enough.
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Wishy-washy
Sorry not up to your normal standard.
Beautiful!
You guys with the criticism... you're as much of fools as the high school version of the story teller. I found this story to be touching and satisfying - left me with a glow. It felt real, and from the heart.
Thank you, Tx.more...
He's an Asshole....
I did not like him, and i fell sorry for her.
He did not only just think about him, pumping three loads into her and not getting her a release, he also knew he wouldn't be back for at least months and took her cherry nonetheless.
An asshole. A girl can only be made a woman once, and that should not be by a years old pseudo love that leaves in a few hours for god knows how long.
He should have been gentleman enough to not take it from her, or be man enough to fuck his family and stay with her.
Otherwise, a technically nice story with emotions and stuff, loved it from that side, and still rate 5 stars.more...
I Agree with "Anonymous - We weren't there"
Because to find a "barrier" at 4" Deep into the vagina is just rediculous and destroys the flow and excitement of an otherwise great story, which evoked many similar beautiful memories of my own. Thanks anyway, a good read! (P.S. The hymen is found at the Vaginal entrance about 1-2mm at most inside the vagina. I think some times confusion arises as the amount of cock visible inside the girl looks greater when her labial lips are wrapped around it, so in raising the amount that appears to be within her, as they can be up to 2" high, but definitely not 4" till the "barrier" is met.)more...
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