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Click hereThrough the open window right below them they could faintly hear the conversation the Kidd gang was having in the bedroom.
"They found your pants," Bella whispered. Her head was next to the one broken pane of glass and she could hear better than the others.
"Didn't think to grab them," Belita whispered back, angry at herself.
"Me either," Will muttered. "Didn't think they'd care enough about the wet clothes in the wash basin."
"Sounds like they're being pretty thorough. They think we might be using magic to hide," Bella said into Will's back.
"Can we do that?" Captain Vex asked.
Bella blinked. "Well, kind of. Maybe."
Bella shifted a bit, trying to get comfortable. The two women were trying their best not to brush against Will's burns. He had thrown a blousy black shirt on, but it didn't do much to protect his angry skin.
They heard the sound of the lock hasp breaking.
"Talk fast," Will said.
"Sex witch, remember. I might be able to do something but I gotta gather energy. That's going to mean sex. Somehow," Bella whispered.
Without any kind of preamble, Belita tugged down the front of Will's pants and engulfed his erection with her mouth. Will and Bella both inhaled sharply as the unexpected pleasure hit them both.
"Yeah, that'll work," Bella said.
The story seems to have lost pace with this chapter. The army of hooligans is not catching my interest. In one chapter, he is the reason that the town is prospering and in the next no one seems to care if he is killed. This entire chapter seemed to cover about an hour of story line with only hints of actual story development. Considering how much of the chapter seemed to be around sexual situations, there wasn't any actual sex.
Overall, it feels like you are kind of floundering around with where to take things. There seem to be plenty of antagonists for the story, so maybe it is time to get on with the adventure.
just read all 13 chapters in one sitting!
Loving the characters and the story - very interested to see where it goes next
Very well written and enjoyable
Congratulations on a great job
Just please give us next chapter... yesterday :-)
Love this story! Just wish we didn’t have to wait 2 weeks for a new chapter!