Lost Souls & Dreamers Beach

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He had a lot of work to do and little time to do it in, but he felt that the walk would do him good. As he walked towards the beach he noticed the trail going through the valley in front of him. He saw the papers blowing around and wondered why such a pristine and pretty beach would have such a mess. A paper blew up and danced in front of him just out of reach. He saw writing on it and grabbed for it. It kept just out of reach until in a long dash he managed to grasp it and hold.

As he turned it around to see the writing, he felt the warmth radiating from it. Huh, he thought, strange that this paper is so warm. As he started to read it he realized that it was an erotic story. As he read it he realized that it was about two women. He thought that it could be better, so as he walked on his thoughts were on the story and how he would be re-writing it. "First of all, a real love story should be a man and a woman." Talking to himself he walked back to his room.

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MeSoHard4UMeSoHard4Uover 10 years ago
Interesting concept

It took a little bit to figure what you were going for, but I liked it once I got there. The 1st vignette was a bit rough and way too short; the 2nd worked pretty well, but was again too short. I'd love too see what you could do with a full-length treatment of each of them.

Keep it up!

FunwithRyleighFunwithRyleighalmost 16 years ago
I love

this concept! The erotic story, spreading sensual and sexual experiences from person to person...

The story being a warm lover... caressing the reader...

Thanks for sharing!

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