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"Well if I was a caveman, you would be married to me just by saying the words." He held her firmly. "And since a part of my brain still works in the caveman fashion, it is semi-applicable here."
"Meaning?"
"I am moving in to see where this goes. Which means no more take out, no more shoving me out the door when you are peeved and no more waking up without you. I am not sure what you have done to me but I am bewitched, and for the first time in my life I am in love."
Taylor gaped at him, trying to process all of the raw emotion swirling around her head. He was moving in, because he loved her! She sighed and accepted the truth, she loved him too. She was not going to tell him of course because he was overbearing enough with the whole "will" thing... She had to have something to hold on to, because she was giving up a lot. Seriously, no take out must not apply to Chinese food. How was a girl to survive without Orange Chicken and steamed dumplings occasionally?
"Ok, so that sounds like something I can work with to a point."
"Meaning? And remember I am not above tying you down and leaving you there until you change your mind."
"I am ok with not shoving you out the door, the take out we will have to negotiate, but the moving in is great. I love you too."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis is genuinely good! May be the most creative piece I have ever read on Lit -
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI had to jump to page 6 after page 1 to read what was telegraphed, that they would become life long lovers, mates, spouses. The ending was OK. Understood you wanted to write an animalistic approach to romance, but it was more animal than romance. Not my preference. Maybe when I get bored I'll read pages 2 through 5, but what for. They met, the fucked, Fucked, FUCKED!! Then they fell in love. Perfect amount of fucking, if you are 13, or not getting any. Glad it was so good for so many. Congratulations.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoVery good writing. Good plot although with twins it's easy to see where this could have gone. Keep up the stories and great work. Love it. 5's from me.
Tastytressalmost 9 years agoAuthorWindrush, I am honored that you would say that. This is my second posting and I am addicted. I am going through my old stories and will definitely be submitting more. Please feel free to comment, I really want to get better.
Windrushalmost 9 years agoFor me, the best story on Literotica: great plot, great writing, great sex!
