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The tape had ended and the trailer was quiet except for our rapid breathing. Outside I could here the leaves of the cottonwoods rustling, and the distant sounds of frogs singing.
Slowly I raised myself up on my elbows, still deeply buried in my lover's warmth to look into her face. Her face was no longer pale, but flushed and pink with health. Her blue eyes shown from the tears that matched my own, and the smile was as radiant as the sun.
I wanted to tell her everything about my life. I wanted to share with her even the tiniest details of my strengths and weaknesses. I wanted to transcend all the boundaries life placed between two people with this woman. But I am only a man, and she is only a woman. In the end I just lay my head on her chest, and let her caress my face and run her fingers through my hair.
For once, I did not have to go home.
- COMMENTS
rbloch66less than a minute agoA truly incredibly, touching story. I’m not ashamed to admit I cried all through it. The way you wrote the pain, longing, and loneliness was palpable. I will remember this story.
ChiBoy44almost 4 years agoI believe, in part this story should go under ' Loving Couples' instead of Sci-Fi....You write enough background to show the reader who your characters are, yet captivate us to keep reading. Most Excellent work. This is the first time I have read your work. I have been reading Erotica for over 30+ years. Great work!!!
FreeJohnover 5 years agoThank You Solitary_Thinker for sharing this wonderful gift with us.
Please keep writing!!!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoVery few stories on Lit hits the reader 'in the feels' as much as this one does. The writing is very efficient: descriptive, concise, and very expressive. Rarely do I read a story and not think of the grammar corrections needed, yet the character development, pacing, and style drew me in completely. To the point that I failed to notice a single needed grammatical correction.
I look forward to reading the other stories =)
Anonymousabout 6 years agoAs is it’s pretty darn good
