Love Wins Against All Odds

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I'm vaguely aware of my hoarse voice crying out his name as my entire body vibrates. I gush cum into his mouth and he sucks it up hungrily, making sure that not even a little bit escapes!

I've never cum so hard in my entire life!

It practically consumes my entire body, every part of me shuddering with currents of hot, delicious tingles!

Finally, I float back to earth, my body stops shaking and my orgasm subsides!

I'm limp, almost falling over, the wall is the only reason I haven't collapsed yet!

Shane continues to lick my pussy, till he's sucked up every bit of cum and my pussy is practically dry.

Only then does he slide his finger out of me because my pussy lips have finally relaxed.

His finger is soaked with my juices and he looks up at me, smiles, and slowly puts it in his mouth, sucking it dry!

Oh my god!

he looks so sexy doing that, I feel like I could cum again just by the hot look on his face!

"You taste so fucking good!" He whispers. "I could eat this pussy all day! It tastes sweet, and your scent is intoxicating! I don't think I've ever enjoyed going down on a girl before the way I just enjoyed you Alisha!"

With a sexy smile he continues, "The next time, I'd like to have you alone for a couple of hours, so I can enjoy this body of yours more thoroughly Alisha!"

Suddenly a car door slams, and I grab my towel in alarm, run into my bedroom slamming the door, as Shane curses under his breath, holding his bulge in his shorts with one hand and scurrying back to the lounge. The front door slams and I hear my brother calling out to Shane. I wrap the towel around me once more, lean back against the bedroom door, breathing heavily and then I smile...Wow!! That had been absolutely insane. I couldn't believe how hot, steamy, and kinky that had been! I never even knew such pleasures even existed! I was definitely missing out and knew without a doubt that Sulayman and I were over! I had no idea how far things with Shane would go and I knew I was playing with fire but I didn't care! Shane had opened my eyes and I was hooked. He had said there would be a next time and I couldn't wait! I was delirious with happiness!

I realize I'm still shaking and my body is glistening with beads of perspiration. My pussy is still tingling and I can feel the hotness of his mouth against it! I figure I need another shower and head back to the bathroom to do just that!!

I snap back to the present as the sleeping form begins to stir, and Shane turns around to face me and smiles sexily up at me. I love this gorgeous man more than anything in this world! He leans forward and kisses my thighs, running his hand up between them and I instinctively moan with pleasure...He sits up next to me and stares deep into my eyes, his love and adoration evident in those amazing eyes of his! He kisses me then with love, passion, wonder, and I know without a doubt that we will be together no matter what. If our family's don't approve, I would give them up for Shane. My mind is already made up as we settle down to make love, our bodies moving together in a rhythm that only we've created. We become one in this moment of pure ecstasy, and I can't tell anymore where I begin and where Shane ends! I feel absolutely complete!!

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SexiShaazSexiShaazabout 7 years agoAuthor
More to the story...

Since this was submitted in accordance with the contest rules, I had to improvise and try to leave it with an ending that can be added to in future. The character Alisha does however say, that no matter what happens, she will never give Shane up and, if forced to, would choose him over her family. There is however, two more parts to this story, which I plan on submitting at the beginning of next month, so I guess that's my spoiler alert... ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A great start for a story

I gave it a 5 on the assumption that this is the first of several installments. If it is, I look forward to them as this was a very erotic start. But if it isn't the first installment of a series, I agree with others that it's very frustrating that it ends where it does.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great tittle

Great tittle for story but the was all . Start over and do a couple of chapter .

We want conflict then resolution.

McMahonSMcMahonSabout 7 years ago
Frustrating

Fails completely to live up to its title. Marked down to 2 stars as it is incomplete with no indication there is more to come unless FTDS picks it up.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 7 years ago
Meh

You spend the whole story telling about the past, in present tense, then never tell us anything about the actual family conflicts and resolution!

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