Lowborn Ch. 10

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Darkniciad
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Once again she shivered, letting out a shuddering sigh. "Yeah, I like it. What about you?"

"Yeah," he responded, finding it hard to keep his rising passion under control.

Raven's lips met his in yet another kiss, her hands roaming over his bare back. Though completely outside his experience, he was able to follow her lead. Their tongues slipped out to caress each other. Breaths came quicker with each passing moment. Finally, she leaned back, sucking in a quavering breath while looking deep into his eyes.

Her expression was strangely shy as she popped open buttons on her blouse. On a whim, he reached out to tug the tail free of her pants, and worked on the buttons from the bottom up, meeting her hands in the middle. Subtle guidance encouraged him to slide his hands up to her shoulders, parting the cloth to reveal her breasts, and then pushing the garment down her arms.

With little room on his small bed for two, the blouse slithered off the edge and down to the floor. A muffled ticking sound as the material pooled on the boards hinted that despite the common appearance, her blouse most likely still concealed a few tools of her trade.

She immediately leaned in for another kiss, wrapping her arms around him to press her breasts against him. Her kisses were stronger, and her fingers slipped beneath the waist of his breeches on occasion as her hands explored his body. He responded in kind, cupping one taut buttock in his hand.

Twin thumps heralded her shoes finding a place beside the bed, which she somehow managed without ever breaking their embrace. Before the second sound of leather on wood had even faded, her hands pushed down on his breeches from the back. Mindblind winced slightly from the discomfort of his rock-hard erection catching on linen, and slid one hand from her back to free the tip of his cock from the trap. She broke from the kiss, her fingers sliding to the front of his breeches to brush against the exposed mushroom tip.

Mindblind lifted his hips as she tugged, allowing her to expose him in the dim light filtering through the single window. As soon as he was nude, she unbuckled her belt, slowly sliding it through the loops on her pants. She caught a sheathed dagger when it dropped free from the retreating leather and secreted it beneath the pillow before allowing her belt to drop to the floor.

Raven reclined, unbuttoning her pants as she sank down to the straw and down-stuffed mattress. Mindblind pulled on the legs and she pushed from the top, sliding down pants and panties at the same time. In short order, they were both nude, and her pants dropped to the floor atop his.

She followed the example of their discarded garments.

Raven's lips found his, and she leaned forward as they kissed, guiding him to lie down. Her knee crossed over his body and she straddled him, the curls on her mound tickling his abdomen while his erection tapped against her taut ass.

She gasped, breaking away from an especially ardent, tongue-wrangling kiss to look down at him and smile. A slight shift of her hips was all it took to press the head of his cock against her slippery sex, and a second engulfed him deep inside her.

Mindblind groaned as her velvety soft walls squeezed him. Above him, she let out a whimpering moan. He was surprised when instead of sitting up over him, she instead sank down atop him, curling an arm behind his neck and pushing the other beneath his back.

He embraced her, one hand resting on the small of her back and the other on the back of her head as she kissed him. Her body moved in sinuous waves atop him, stirring his cock inside her. She moaned and whimpered into their kisses, seemingly trying to pull him closer with each passing moment.

As usual, she was in control, but it was far different this time. Gone was the almost desperate rush to climax, replaced with a tenderness that neither of them had really experienced before. Blissful minutes rolled by — their bodies joined as one — and they reveled in the slow boil of rising pleasure.

Sweat slicked their bodies as Raven moved faster, her breaths coming in short pants. "I... Oh... Oh yes," she softly whimpered, and then stiffened.

Mindblind caressed her back and ran his fingers through her hair as she came, her fingers curling into claws. She trembled, her mouth hanging open and eyes tightly closed — frozen in a moment of perfect ecstasy. It ended with a high-pitched moan as she collapsed atop him, still shivering and twitching.

Nowhere near his own peak, he simply held her as her orgasm played out. He found he was smiling and relaxed, perfectly content as her intimate muscles unpredictably clenched and fluttered around him.

"Oh. Oh wow. That was different," she whispered, her breath stirring his hair. A chuckle shook her, and then she moaned. "It was so good, though."

He kissed the top of her head — the only place he could reach in their current position.

"Did you..?"

"It's okay."

It wasn't really an answer, but she must have understood. "Better than okay. Gods, I'm still tingling all over. But I want you to get there too."

Raven showed no sign of moving, and as strange as it was, she felt good in his arms, lost in the afterglow of her orgasm. He was on the verge of drifting off to sleep again, still buried deep inside her hot, slippery sheath when she shifted her weight.

Opening his eyes, he realized she was rolling off to the side, but still holding on to him tight. He got the hint and planted one hand on the bed, pushing to roll with her. He slipped free, his cock slapping against him and spattering her juices up his abs.

"No," she plaintively moaned. "Back in." At the same time, she wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him closer.

A growling groan escaped him as his cock slid back inside her. His balls had barely settled against her when she wrapped her legs around him as well. The pressure of her legs tightened, pulling him closer, then relaxed. He fell into the rhythm, rocking his hips in time with her squeezes.

"Ahhh. Ohhh. Just like that," she moaned. "Right there. Ohhh yes."

Though his range of movement was limited, it was more than enough. The feeling of sliding in and out of her made him groan and his heart quicken. The slow pace of his short thrusts let him feel her clinging to every inch of him. Her every indrawn breath was a gasp, and she let out sharp whimpers every so often, her eyes alternately widening and pinching closed. Though he didn't know it, the position was perfectly causing his cock to slide along her swollen clit, driving her toward another peak right alongside him.

"S-say my name, Cerebus. P-please," She gasped out as the needs of his body pushed him to thrust faster.

"So good, Raven," he groaned.

"No. No. Real name." The last trailed off into a loud squeal.

"Rayneena."

"Y-y-yes!"

"Come for me, Rayneena," he said, recognizing the signs in her expression that her pleasure was mounting toward a crescendo.

"Yes. So close. I... I... Ahh! Mmm!"

A quavering cry of release burst from her lips as she reached her peak, her arms and legs tightening around him. Her walls contracted, though his passion-fueled strength allowed him to resist her grip and keep thrusting.

"Ah, Rayneena. Gonna come," he grunted.

Raven squealed, the sound transforming into broken, breathless words as she continued to come. "Fill me up. Yes! C-come!"

His last thrust was powerful, driving her ass down into the mattress. A sound mingling qualities of a growl, groan, and roar rumbled in his throat, echoing back from the walls as it joined her cries of release, forming a symphony of perfect ecstasy. His cum erupted in a long, powerful jet, coating the entrance to her womb and pooling in her depths. After the briefest of pauses, he sucked in a great breath and lurched when a second ejaculation traveled up the length of his shaft, bursting forth with equal power to the first.

Again and again, his balls tightened, his shaft pulsed, and his seed further flooded her depths. The sound of them both crying out grew dim — muffled. His head was swimming as sweat ran in rivulets down his arms and abdomen, dripping onto her equally glistening body below. She writhed on the mattress, pinned down by his throbbing shaft as they remained trapped in the seemingly endless cycle of wonderful agony.

By the time Mindblind's wits returned, he was barely supporting his weight above her on a trembling arm. Raven was desperately panting for breath, still twitching from aftershocks. Near to collapse, he moved with barely any conscious thought. His cock pulled free with a slurping sound that she drowned out with a yelp, and he collapsed next to her on the bed, precariously perched on the edge.

For long minutes, neither of them could catch their breath. Raven somehow found the presence of mind to roll over, laying her head on his chest. Eventually, they both settled down from their peaks, and Mindblind draped a weary arm over her naked back.

"Okay, that was really good," Raven said, her voice sounding odd because her cheek was still pressed against his chest.

"Oh, fuck yeah," he had to agree. He had come so much that near the end, he'd had the brief, irrational thought that his balls were trying to come up as well.

"Thought I was going to faint when you said my name — my real name."

"Thought it would feel odd saying it, but it didn't. Felt right."

"So right. Think we woke the family up?"

"Don't really care right now."

She let out a girlish giggle. "This was Kay's idea. She talked about how wonderful it was. She was right. I'm going to have to thank her."

"Me too."

Raven gave a tug on his arm, encouraging him to move closer to the center of the bed. She snuggled in so that neither of them was on the verge of falling off, and for a while, they lay together in silence.

Mindblind let out a surprised grunt when her fingers traced the length of his softened — and still sensitive — cock.

"Not that down and dirty fucking isn't great too," she said, the previous softness of her voice gone. "And I'm ready for more."

Mindblind's head thumped hard into the pillow as she darted in, slurping his cock between her lips to get it hard again.

It didn't take long at all.

****

"You know, a girl could get used to this," Raven said, snuggling up against Mindblind as he awoke. No light shone through the window, indicating that they'd awakened before the sun.

"Think I could too."

"I don't have to remind you that I'll cut out your tripes if you ever breathe a word of it to anyone, do I?"

"Hehe. Nope."

"Much as I don't want to get up, I should probably head into town and see how Yani's doing. She actually notices when I'm gone now. It's almost strange."

"Good strange, though."

"Yep." Raven sighed and climbed out of bed.

Mindblind couldn't help but admire her lithe, nude body as she bent to pick up her discarded clothing. When she caught him, she twitched her eyebrows and swatted her bottom before returning to the task at hand.

A basin of water let them both wash off the abundant evidence of the previous night's passion, though Mindblind suspected the bedclothes and even the mattress itself were probably done. The whole of the small room smelled like sex. He dressed as well when she did, and the first rays of sunlight peeked above the horizon as they met in front of the door.

"Coming into town with me?" she asked as she opened the door and stepped out.

Seeing his younger brother headed toward him from the front of the house, he smiled. "Can't just yet. I've got a promise to keep."

"I'll be waiting at the Cat, then. Don't be too long."

Vladamir walked past Raven, and almost immediately turned around to stare at her. Mindblind grabbed his brother's arm, spinning him around.

"Who's that?" Vladamir asked, looking back over his shoulder.

"Do you want to hear about the adventure, or not?"

That was more than enough to distract Vladamir from the sight of Raven. He nodded his head emphatically.

Mindblind laughed and patted his brother on the back. "Well, it started out just like I told you it would — a boring, bumpy wagon ride..."

****

Hope you've enjoyed this look into Mindblind's past. Some day, I'll get around to telling Vladamir's story as well.

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voyeurdunuitvoyeurdunuit30 days ago

Thanks for an excellent, really fun read. Everything about it is really well done - the characters, the dialog, the pacing, the action, and the sex. I just found you, notice that it's 10 years old so I hope there are some more stories in the list with Mindblind and company.

Horseman68Horseman686 months ago

Totally excellent. This series is such a great read. Bravos.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Enjoyed this story. Good characters, good plot, good fight scenes, good sex scenes. Would enjoy a sequel. Mimdblind is a good character that is deserving of more adventures. Raven, too.

DarkniciadDarkniciadalmost 2 years agoAuthor
Just a quick note:

There's a pseudo sequel of this teetering on the edge of finished. I'm trying to get this one scene to play out in a way that feels right so I can get to the finale, which is clearly written in my head.

It follows Betty ( who had the little miracle bottle in her bodice ) striking out on her own after grand success opening their brothel in "stingy pussy". Mainly a new cast of characters, but you never know who might show up ;)

It's called "One Whore's Town" and it's not big enough for the both of them.

As always, I'm forever tinkering and making tiny little advances on SOTM. I don't want to just release 1 chapter and then go who knows how long, so I wait until I have at least a couple to offer up. New Darkni story in the works as well, which is the second of his trilogy. After that trilogy is a Darki/Mindblind story, and the end of that directly launches into that long awaited story of how the companions got together and ended up freeing/ruling Egoria.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Started with "Danica", was left hanging with SOTM (that's one huuuuge plot that you've got to finish... one day, hopefully), had lot of smiles with "The Art Ardane", got very much enchanted by "To Catch a Merchant Princess" (god, I'd love a continuation of Alicia and Thakkor's story)... and now I'm finding myself out of words for this well rounded piece about Mindblind and the absolutely adorable Raven. All that over the course of one week in which I haven't done much else than reading your stories.

What I like most about "Lowborn" is how you adapt your style of writing. I could already sense a more down to earth approach with TCaMP but the atmosphere around Lowborn is special. Mindblind, Raven, Indigo and the - how do you call it? - ladies of negotiable virtue are so freaking authentic, it's mind-numbing. The settings you use, the interactions and words spoken between the characters, the fighting scenes, the sex scene, the whole perfect plot... it's amazing. You, sir, got a fantastic sense for storytelling and painting pictures with the use of the right words. Thank you so much for sharing your art with us.

P.S.: And of course I'd like to know how Mindblind got from Raven to Christi and on to a Duke's title.

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