Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 29

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Even when they made love during the afternoon, he was dreaming of it, turning her over, pinning her roughly to the mattress, and doing whatever he wanted to her, as long as he needed to until they both felt the ecstasy. But he felt powerless to tell the lovely thing that he wanted to fuck her occasionally. Not all the time. Just sometimes. Only sometimes.

He also felt like she'd had such a terrible past, he shouldn't even try to broach his lusty craving with Lynne. He needed to slow down, and savor, and enjoy making love with her, and maybe one day he could have the wild sex with her that he fantasized about. He couldn't even imagine what fucking her would feel like. He'd never felt so much pleasure as he felt when he was intimate with Lynne, when they made sweet love and shared their bodies. Making tender love to her was like a drug. He'd never knew what it meant to make love, before, he thought he did but he hadn't and making love with her felt good, good, good! So he couldn't even imagine just being primal, and raw with her, and fucking her so good, he knew his body would just be throbbing all over with joy, and pleasure.

Damn he wanted to fuck her so good!

"I'm not fucking cheating. Too bad if you can't handle a little neck tickling. Supposed to be so good, look at you, showing off, you're so baked, but you still do all the little cheats and stuff. Should be able to handle this too," he said tickling her feet between her soles and the ball of her toes.

She started to giggle.

"Shit, that shit tickles," she squealed trying to move her feet away.

Now Lyle, and his girlfriend Martha were laughing too, because Lynne had a goofy, contagious little laugh with that comical snort.

"I can't breathe!" she cried.

She lost her life on the game.

His brother started humming the classic Mario theme for when someone lost a life, since Lynne had just lost her life on screen. Then Lyle quipped,

"Shit man, it's toast for you. Too bad the man you are about to marry is such a big fucking cheater. I would see about that Lynne. Leif has always been a big fucking cheater. And you see how he bullied you. I wouldn't stand for it. I would not,"

Lynne sat in Leif's lap and started playfully pushing and punching at his chest.

"You little hellcat, stop listening to my brother. If this is supposed to be making me angry, it's turning me on. I like you fighting me you little cutie. Why don't you bite me too while you're at it," said Leif with a bemused chuckle.

Lynne looked angry and exasperated, and leaned in to pinch his nipple.

"Ow, Okay, I get it baby, that shit hurts, come on baby, play nice," chuckled Leif.

"I tell you what, Leif likes to bully because he's taller than his big brother. But his armpits are ticklish. So never say your future brother in law never helped you," said his brother.

Lynne's eyes glimmered with delight, and before Leif got a chance to stop her by mashing his arms tight, she was leaning close to him, and tickling him under both pits.

And he couldn't help it. He chuckled so hard he was pink.

"Okay, Okay, stop it Lynney, I won't...I'm sorry I messed you up on the level. Come on...don't be like this woman!" he shouted with laughter.

"Come on please, don't be like this woman! You sound like a woman to me," teased Lynne, mimicking his high pitched laugher.

His brother howled with laughter.

"I sound like a woman! I'll show you how you sound like a woman," he moaned shielding himself from the tickling.

He turned Lynne over on his lap and started spanking her. He was turned on and they were both giggling at the same time. He wondered if Lynne was a little turned on. She acted turned on whenever he wrestled with her when they were alone.

“Tell me you’re a naughty little girl Lynney, and Leify will stop,” he said, spanking her ass.

"Okay, okay, I'm a naughty little girl! I'll stop now, truce, truce," she moaned trying to shield her little ass from his spankings.

"That shit is so wrong bro. I should hold you down so she can spank your ass. Totally wrong. Lynne just remember pits, it gets him every time," said his brother.

Lyle reached over trying to get Leif under the armpits.

It broke his hold on Lynne.

Then both Lyle and Martha wrestled Leif and held him down. And Lynne was laughing and spanking him and tickling his pits.

He had an erection because of rough housing with Lynne and he was glad Lynne had him pinned to the couch, so his brother, and Martha didn’t see. They would have laughed at him for sure, and called him gross.

His brother and Martha released Leif from their hold, now that Lynne had pinned him down, so only Lynne was sitting on his back, his hands helplessly behind his head.

She had both his hands behind his back now pinned with one hand. The other hand she used to continue to tickle his pits and now Leif screamed with laughter.

"Who is the girl now? Who is the cheater at the old assed video games?"

Then she started to spank his ass.

"Cute, round, sexy little ass! You're my bitch now boy! Who's a girl!" teased Lynne.

At the you're my bitch now comment, they all collapsed with laughter

"Oh shit Lynne! Stop, stop! I'm your bitch, I'm your bitch, and I’m a cheater at the old assed videogames. Can I have my dignity back," he crowed between laughter.

"Maybe...Maybe I’ll let you have some dignity back. it's getting to easy and not fun anymore," cried Lynne with more laughter, getting off of his back.

The four of them were howling with laughter. Seeing her like this with his closest family, he came to appreciate just how lovely, fun, witty and spunky Lynne was, and how wonderfully she fit in with his family, along with just how much he loved her with a deep and lasting love.

No matter what the future held, he knew that marrying the lovely woman would be the best decision of his life.

But now, he needed to be alone with her, to unleash some of the arousal that wrestling her had caused him, in private. He gathered himself together, and willed his erection to go down.

“Lynney, aren’t you a little bit tired out from all your violent ways,” asked Leif.

“Oh come on, you just want to bone her again,” said his brother with a laugh.

“You two crazy kids go on some place. Maybe I can catch some action with the old lady,” said his brother, mimicking the greasy speech of hipsters from the 1950’s.

***

His family was fun, but Lynne was happy to be alone with Leif again, back in their little cottage.

“Baby, I hope, I hope you don’t use the knowledge of my ticklish pits against me now,” said Leif looking at her with playful eyes.

“You think I’m not using that against you. Ha! You will rue the day I learned that secret. It was fun getting you to say, you were my bitch,” teased Lynne.

Leif pulled her into the circle of his arms aggressively. So aggressively it startled her and she let out a startled little

“Oh,”

He softly, tenderly sucked her top, and bottom lip.

It always felt so damn good and tingly all in her stomach and fanning down between her legs when he sucked her lips like that.

“Damn Lynne, you taste so good to me. Does it make me perverted if I get turned on by you, like almost all the time? Like even at inappropriate moments. Like, on the subway, and I have to get my boner to go down. Or even, even in there in front of my brother and his girlfriend when you were spanking my ass and making me into your bitch,” he murmured into her neck.

Lynne chuckled and blushed. He was funny and sexy! She loved this man, and the torrid sensual chemistry between them!

“No, Lief, I have rinsed out more pairs of panties since I’ve known you than I ever have in my life. In fact I never needed to rinse them out at all before you,” she added through her chuckles.

“Oh am I ever glad to know that I’m not the only one who feels like a teenager right now. Do you know how hard it is when, every waking moment almost, I get turned on by your sweet little ways. I crave you all the time. These sweet little breasts,” he groaned grabbing her braless little breasts in the casual white t-shirt.

Lynne just whimpered. Her body loved him, and he circled her hardening nipples so gently with his thumbs. Sexy gorgeous man, she couldn’t wait for him to put his dick inside her again, she too felt like a hormone addled, lusty beast.

“Puffy, sexy little nipples. Wanted to suck them since I was tickling your neck trying to make you lose the game,” he groaned.

He lifted her shirt and started licking around her belly button.

Lynne tangled her hands in his dreadlocks, and she groaned.

He stood on his knees before her.

“I don’t like calling women bitches. I’ve never done it. And I would never do that to you…I will never use that word with you sweet baby. But, I don’t mind being your bitch little Lynney, or if you tease me right now and call me your bitch, I’m man enough to know it’s all fun and games. It was a little fun, you spanking me on the ass like that and calling the shots. You should make me. You should make me be a good boy and kiss and suck your pretty little pussy all night long for making you loose at your little game and trying to embarrass you and spank you in front of my brother and his girlfriend. You should make me eat and suck it all night. Hardly seems like a punishment, either. I can’t wait to pay for my sins, sucking your kitty all night long. Woman, I’m sick for you, like to smell, and kiss, and suck it so much. You should make me do it even when my dick hurts and not give me any relief, by letting me feel your warm wet pussy,” he groaned, and he started unbuttoning her jeans.

Lynne unzipped her jeans the rest of the way, and bent over, deliberately teasing him with a fabulous view of her ass. She knew that he enjoyed the view when she felt him gently biting her right butt check.

She chuckled with delight, then murmured-

“I…I’m sick for you sucking and kissing, and licking on my pussy too. I never want you to stop when you do it. I thought of it on the plane when I was nervous flying here. Just thinking of that pleasure made a wave of sweetness and calm and joy float over me, thinking about how good the orgasms are, when you love me with your mouth,” she added.

She stood before him, and he was kneeling before her, ready to worship her, and she pushed his head hard into her wet panty crotch.

Then she felt embarrassed at what she was doing, and hot strains of shy color flooded her cheeks. And she chuckled.

“This feels so naughty,” she cried with a chuckle.

“Damn, that shy shit is so cute,” he groaned huskily.

“You know you want it woman,” he groaned, gently cupping her ass, and nuzzling her wet panty crotch with his nose.

“Oh damn it Leif you make it feel good!” she cried, and he made her feel so good wriggling his nose into her pussy she curled her toes into the carpet. And he wasn’t even licking her yet.

“Make me sniff your pussy!” he moaned into her thighs.

Lynne giggled, then when he took his nose away from rubbing her pussy, which gave her sexual pleasure, she pulled at his dreadlocks, and knew she had to say it, anything for that sweet pleasure to return.

“Smell my pussy!” she said in a playful demanding voice.

“Mmmm…yes Ma’am. Yes little wifey, I’ll do whatever you say. You smell so good baby,” he added, rubbing his nose up to the crotch.

It felt good to Lynne.

“You should make me smell your ass too,” said Leif huskily.

She turned around and pushed her ass up to his nose. The things they did together, the sensual fun and games. Lynne chuckled with both embarrassment and delight.

“Mmmm, I love how your cute ass smells,” he groaned, butting his nose up to it. Then he licked her crack lustily through her cotton boy cut panties.

Those cute, fat little ass cheeks started to squirm with the intensity of her pleasure.

“Oh it’s so nasty and good, I love it baby!” she moaned.

“Then spread your cute little cheeks and make me lick it,” he said huskily.

Lynne felt so embarrassed. She chuckled and blushed and held her hands up to her face and giggled.

“That shy little woman shit turns me on a lot Lynne. But you like it. You’re nasty like your husband to be. It feels really good to you when I lick your ass. You love it. You squeal like I’m hurting you and squirm your little body everywhere. Show me,” he murmured gently brushing her crotch panty crotch with gentle fingers.

Lynne moaned, then teased him-

“I thought you were being the bitch,”

But then, Leif pulled her panties to the side and boldly licked up and down, up and down her ass crack now, and all she could do was clutch her fists together and howl helplessly with joy.

“Oh those sweet little loud, helpless whimpers. That’s almost more range that you use on stage little cutie. I should do that to you in a sound booth huh? Make a great record,” he teased.

He licked her ass again, and she couldn’t help the loud, lusty cries.

She turned around to face him, where he was compliant on his knees.

“Oh boy you got me all worked up being nasty, now you better eat it, Oh I need to feel that pleasure,” she moaned gripping his jaw lightly.

He looked up into her eyes with his tender blue ones, and he had an absolutely lovesick expression, and she was sure that her eyes were also foggy with both love and lust.

She pulled down her panties, slipped them over her ankles, and stood up, with her legs spread. Leif had never licked her femininity with her standing up, and she hotly anticipated and wondered what it would feel like.

She stood with her legs spread as best she could, then cupped his head from behind.

Leif didn’t waste anytime at all kissing, and sucking her already swollen and puffy lips.

“Baby it feels good!” she cried.

He licked, and sucked, and moaned with pleasure as though eating a savory dish.

The pleasure was so sweet and intense that she needed to grip the sides of his head as an anchor to keep from wanting to fall over.

“Beautiful little pussy. So sorry I was such a bad boy. I deserve my punishment,” he moaned between kisses of her coarse hairs.

“Oh Leif, I love how you make my pussy feel. You’re such a good boy now!” she shouted playing along.

“Oh I want to be Lynne’s good boy!” he groaned into her pussy.

He parted it gently with his thumbs, and then he baptized her clitoris with the tender motions of his loving tongue.

She looked down into his eyes lovingly, and just happened to look up for just a second, and she saw their reflection in the mirror.

She had never seen an image of herself engaged in any tender, sexual acts before, and viewing Leif’s blonde dreadlocks between her legs, her eyes fogged with lust, lips all full and pouty with his tender kisses and her growing sexual pleasure, was so beautiful, she felt the tears flow to the corner of her eyes.

“Oh God, what you do to me is beautiful! I love you so damn much Leif!" she cried.

Her eyes were filled up with tears, and she was trembling with pleasure, and crying, her tears falling into his dreadlocks.

“Oh you see yourself huh Lynney! How beautiful and sexy you are. Why don’t you watch your loving man make you come baby,” he murmured tenderly.

He gently sucked and kissed her pussy, and it was a struggle for her to watch as the strains of pleasure flooded her body. Her first instinct was either to look down at him, or squeeze her eyes shut.

But the rapture she saw reflected on her own face as he teased and tickled her pussy lovingly with his tongue, over her clitoris, teasing her vulva and occasionally stopping to penetrate her between her legs, or lick her anus gently, finally she couldn’t even stop herself from holding into his ears gently and swaying sensuously into his face, his sexy face glistening with her juices in the mirror, rocking towards him, slicking his sexy face of his with her juices, and soon, making sweet, guttural noises, as the torrent of tingles rained down into a hot, sweet flame.

She gushed with so much wetness now, it dribbled down her thighs, her pussy quivered with pleasure, and Leif cleaned the wetness out, penetrating her with his tongue and giving her the hot pleasure of multiple orgasms. She thrusted herself passionately towards him and moaned how much she loved him each time she climaxed.

Her stomach and thighs were slick with sweat, and joy from his loving. She got down on her knees and kissed him lustily, passionately, loving the sweet, hot sensual flavors of all their tastes commingling.

Then, she lay down on the bed, spread her legs and whispered softly.

“You’re still being punished. Again,” very softly and he obediently crawled beside her and ate her pussy until she squealed everywhere with her intense orgasm, buoyed on even stronger by the first.

After doing it twice more, she had such loving pity on Leif, because his cock ached, that she had him sit on the edge of the bed, while she pleasured him orally, loving the taste of his thick, meaty, delicious dick in her mouth. She loved watching herself, going down on him, her mouth engorged with Leif's huge, beautiful, pink cock.

It just looked so erotic, what she could glance out of the corner of her eye, taking him into her lips like that, sucking as much of his cock as she could fit in her mouth, tickling him in that luscious male slit of his with her tongue. And the way he stroked her face, her cheek, and her lips as she sucked him...

And his moaned words of love...

"You suck it so good baby," and "I love you so much", encouraged her to make him feel even better. She gently squeezed his aching balls as she sucked him now, and he groaned with pleasure.

"Oh, it feels good when you squeeze them soft like that!" he groaned.

And, then she masturbated his shaft while tickling the tiny rough, sweet spot on the under side of his cock head.

"Oh damn baby, I love you so much!" he cried.

He cupped her cheek intensely due to the pleasure of his impending climax.

It was a thunderous orgasm, full of hot, potent, sticky come, because she had not allowed him to come earlier when he was serving his "sentence" and his punishment.

He got so worked up kissing and sucking her pussy, and she felt so lucky that he had so much come to give her, she wanted to swallow every drop of his hot steamy load. She loved the sweet and salty taste of his earthy spunk.

"You taste so good to me Leify," she cried.

She swallowed him down whole, and was delighted as usual when he wanted to kiss her feverishly, the sweet taste of her sex, his sex, and all the flavors of their love melting together in a delicious whole...she loved the taste of their shared sex fluids.

They shared several steamy tongue kisses.

Then Lynne murmured softly,

“I’m sleepy,” and Leif reached over, turned out the lights on the nightstand and pulled her close.

“I forgot to mention that one of the most important parts of learning to be a good husband to my bride-to-be, is learning to serve as a cuddle toy,” he said playfully taking her into the circle of his arms.

She giggled. But before she came up with any witty response to his sweet comment, she’d fallen deeply asleep in his arms.

***

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Forgot to mention the brother and his girlfriend in the restaurant scene. And still no clue what happened to the cat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So beautiful!

The love between these two are so beautiful and tender, it just warms my heart! Please keep going, this story is amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Some people just do notg get it

I am a black woman who was abused by men and women from the age of 4, and trust me if i had met a man like him, i would not be a 44yr old who gave up relationship and sex over 15 yrs ago. She is already coming out of her shell. I sadley have never been loved, but your story makes me feel good, even though it is fiction i am so happy for her, for finding him.

mich80newmich80newover 10 years agoAuthor

Okay, I have read your comments and feedback on the story. I appreciate the time that you all have invested in these characters. I value the time you spend reading this story.

I also want you all to know that I do spend time trying to edit my work, before I submit, but I also see how some of the scenes may have gotten tedious to read. When you take a time to leave a comment, it helps me to improve my writing,

I am trying to strike a delicate balance here and tell a story about a woman who has been abused and denied kindness on a very basic level, and a man who doesn't realize how kind and gentle can be until he falls head over heels in love with her. It's really supposed to be set up so that the more he sees her thriving in his love, the sweeter he wants to be with her.

And then you have the whole issue with her family only showing her conditional love. Being raised very strict, and never having a real chance to play, and be free, the way most folks are growing up. She's also been raped, and while she might be book smart, she's lived a very sheltered life. So I'm trying to tell her story from that perspective, and how she finds strength and security, her sexuality (most imprtant piece) and the things she missed when she was growing up, and kindness and care in Leif's arms. From his perspective, he is learning that being a real man is treating one woman with tenderness and care with the devotion he feels for her, rather than screwing every woman who walks.

It is not my intention to tell a story with creepy, under developed characters, but since I have seen so many of you say that, I appreciate your feedback. I was in the middle of writing another update, but I'm going to scrap this update for now, let it sit a little while and try to incorporate some of your feedback and suggestions into my next post.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Seriously

I really do not want to discourage you but after spending a considerable amount of time reading this and refraining from commenting I feel it is important that I give some feedback on this story. Firstly I was interested in the characters, at least initially. Despite my increasing irritation with the repetitious, unrealistic and often child-like language I kept reading because I liked the essence of the characters and hoped you would develop them as the story went on. However in the last few chapters the writing seems to have taken a step back and the repetition of thoughts, language and oh dear goodness if I see the words cute, little, old assed, new assed, naughty, nasty (and what on earth is light black skin?) in your writing it would be a moment too soon. Far from developing the characters they are now almost child-like, underdeveloped and bordering on creepy. Their speech is utterly unrealistic and their behviour rings profoundly untrue. I did care about them before but frankly now I really don't feel comfortable reading about them. Neither they or your writing sounds natural. You really need to read more good writing and take time with yours. Consider when you write a phrase or a paragraph if you have expressed the essence of it previously. Your audience is capable and clever. We have good recall. I'm afraid I'm now done with this story. It did have promise but only delivered such disappointment.

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