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"I just need you. I promise to always come to you first with my concerns from now on," moaned Lynne, inhaling the fragrant masculine smell of his bath soap.
"Good, I promise not to be so macho sometimes, and try to see shit from your perspective. The shit did seem sneaky. But you're gonna love your surprise. You like surprises...and only the best for my special girl," he added playfully swatting her ass.
"Well, only if I get to fix breakfast for my king," said Lynne.
He followed her into the kitchen and she started whipping up something for their breakfast, just simple a simple omelets and some toast.
Leif made such a playful pest of himself fiddling with ingredients and trying to fondle her that Lynne sat him playfully at the table like a naughty little boy, and peeled off her panties which were already wet and warm with their playful affection. She told him playfully to use them to amuse himself, and stop making trouble.
When she handed them to him, he put the morning paper down, clutched the panties and inhaled them like she'd given him the most fragrant perfume he'd ever smelled before. He fondled them lovingly and smelled them continually without embarrassment as she fixed the omelets, and he was rock hard when he pulled her into his lap and they ate the breakfast together, both forks just pecking right into the frying pan with the eggs.
Then, they fell into her favorite position in the kitchen, she on his lap, he beneath her, without ever missing a beat. She only wished they were husband and wife, and he could have knocked the frying pan onto the floor, and fucked her hard!
The glimmer in his bright blue eyes while they were coming told her that he was dreaming the same thing.
And her treats still weren't over yet. He washed the dishes, then called her into the living room while he rubbed her feet and fed her the m&m's one by glorious one like she loved while they watched the local morning news.
It left her with one delightful conclusion. Leif was spoiling her rotten in his tender care! And because he loved her with such a pure and tender love, she couldn't wait to give him her body, any way that he pleased, he deserved that much!
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoLove this series! It deserves to be printed. I don't agree with the criticism. The story and dialogue is perfect. I only recently came across the series and immediately spent an entire day reading the first thirty-five chapters. I just want Lynne and Leif to start a family now. If it doesn't happen in this series, we need a sequel please.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI want to like this story. You're a talented writer and you've really set the scene for these characters. The problem, for me, is that it's now all scene and very little action. I agree with the others that have mentioned that it doesn't feel like the story is moving forward, just circling their same issues and deepening this dynamic of Lynn being immature (with no growth in sight) and Leif being her white knight. Even the dialogue between Leif and his mother felt unrealistic and made Lynn seem like she was a barely functioning adult. I get that she has emotional issues and has been stunted in some ways but she's an adult who has managed to get through life this far... All I can say is that I really hope the next chapter brings us to the wedding because the build up is killing us.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI love this story a lot however I do not like the dialogue between Lynn and Leif it makes it seem that Lynn is slow. I know Lynne had it tough growing up but that don't mean she has to be talk to like a baby. Frankly it's annoying and and insult. You have a great writing gift keep,writing just tone down this unnecessary dialog. The are adults very bright.
mssoft2hldalmost 10 years agoI enjoyed this story at first really I did. I looked forward to your updates. However, as the chapter number went higher the dialogue got more tedious and droning. It is almost each character took a big breath and just kept going. I can imagine them just standing in their apartment late for work going on and on "Oh Leify.. So tender so sensual"... The characters have become BORDERLINE unbearable. This unhealthy codependent relationship looked to be evolving but it isn't , this story seems to just go forward with the wedding but its the same loop we're reading... There are less " Oh leify" and Lennie and only a few tenders but it's basically just not going anywhere... Well it is but with the droning and characters being so... I don't know. I can't read anymore. This is your art and I'm only one person that may feel this way so keep writing no matter what but I just can't with this anymore.
