They sat staring into one another's eyes. As exciting as it was to learn they had both won, in that moment it hardly mattered. They smiled, seeing in one another something that hadn't been there until now.
"So what are the two of you going to do now?" came their host's question as he walked up beside them.
"We're going to Disney Land!" Kay said giggling.
"The hell we are!" Jack said drawing her back into his arms. "We're going home...and fuck!"
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If the need to criticise spelling and grammar is more important than content then it is such a pity. I doubt that arousal or erotic enjoyment has benefited from distraction. If you need purity of written language maybe Shakespeare is more appropriate for you.more...
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