Majgen Ch. 010

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Upon her revelation he briefly scanned her memory of the event, to ascertain she truly had not performed invasive procedures or attempted actual therapy. Looking at her memories of sharing minds with Fral, Weissme got the impression that he was looking at a clumsy and unprofessional, albeit harmless, attempt at mind sharing, that was all a fast half-hearted glance showed the Ottearon.

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Copyright of Nanna Marker (lit ID ellynei)

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Encourage or

Educate me

Dear reader if you made it this far

Be

A

Conscious person

Knowing not how my words affect

it is

Paranoia inducing

Lets me not

See

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is late feed back. I started reading this series yesterday and was immediately drawn into the story. I enjoy stories on extra mental abilities and yours is different enough to keep me curious. My major complaint is the level of violence but you don’t dwell on it so it’s acceptable for me to continue reading. I don’t understand how with their mental ability they resort to such basic physical punishment. Keep it up I will continue reading this and your other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Art

I am really impressed by your story. Your creativity keeps me on edge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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fantastic story. i don't know enough about writing to complain about any writing mistakes. however, i feel as if the story is slowing down and its losing my utmost attention. havent read further than this chapter tho =] great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome!

I really enjoy your writing. I'll be checking out your other stories once I finish this book.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I should be working...

instead, 10 chapters in... and I'm going onto chapter 11.

Awesome read.

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