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By the time we reached the car, I was so aroused and quivering again. When Tom let me in, I didn't think about it, I just started rubbing my clit. When Tom came around to his side and saw me, he started fondling my nipples while I was rubbing away. I started to quiver and shake almost uncontrollably. Tom backed off my nipples and I shook to a very intense orgasm. Wow! What was that about? When I opened my eyes, I could see people not too far away that had watched me walk naked to the car. It's unlikely they knew I had just pleasured myself but who knows? I might have been really loud. I have never come like that. I would've never in my wildest dreams imagined I'd have this reaction to going naked in public. I swear, the combination of being scared and excited and fulfilling one of my ultimate fantasies were just too much. As I relaxed into the seat, something else occurred to me. Tom will be driving me across town toward home in broad daylight, while I'm completely naked. Wow! This day is turning out to be much more than I'd bargained for.
It was hot in the car so Tom rolled all the windows down as we drove though the parking lot. I was in my seat, but from the outside it was clearly visible that I was at least topless. I received a lot of waves and stares from people in cars and on foot. Then it occurred to me that Tom didn't head out of the parking lot but instead was circling the circumference of the mall right up where the shops are and where there's more likelihood of being seen. Sure enough, I hear several "there she is" from folks. I was kind of liking this as well. Tom turned the air on full but left the windows all open and put child lock on then looked at me and said "revel in it". He circled once more then we left.
So, on the road not too many, but some people could see I was topless. (if they'd known I was completely naked...). Then a few SUV's and pickups got the full view. Now this I've done. One of my early fantasies was to drive around with only a top on to allow people in tall vehicles only a good view of my shaved little treat.
The rest of the ride home was pretty much the same. Then it dawned on me that I have to break one of my rules. NIP at home. Tom parked the car. He had my keys all along so he was holding them. I was feeling really nervous about this, then I asked him to come in. He mentioned he would like nothing better after seeing me today than to come in and have sex, but he said he couldn't. This isn't about him it's about me and taking advantage of me isn't right. I hadn't realized I was asking him in for sex, but honestly, the way I feel that's exactly what would've happened. He handed me my keys, kissed me and said let's talk tomorrow. He asked if this was everything I wanted it to be. I replied that despite the sudden change in plans, yes. I absolutely enjoyed every bit of it. I really did and it was so much more intense than I'd thought and in ways that I never expected. I took the keys looked around then ran up to my door and went in. Tom pulled away.
When I got inside, I nearly collapsed. What a day of extreme nervousness, terror and excitement followed by that earth shattering orgasm in the parking lot. I had no idea but I really, really like being naked in public much more than I'd ever imagined. I think I may have awakened something here that's really big. I went to the kitchen and poured a glass of Chardonnay and came back to sit on the couch. I still hadn't put any clothes on but I did take my heels off. I turned on the TV and starting to masturbate again until I fell asleep.
The next morning, I showered and was toweling off when I received a knock at the door. I threw a robe on and answered the door. It was a package over-nighted to me from Tom. What the fuck is this? I opened it up and there, neatly folded was my knit cotton dress with a note that explained that while I was heading up to the start my walk, Tom walked over and prepaid at UPS. When he got the dress, he put this note in with it and took it back over to the UPS store. He apologized and hoped I would be a good sport about it. That shit! He planned the missing dress all along! Wholly shit! That fucker! God damn you Tom!
After awhile when I calmed down, I reflected back on yesterday's events. This was my fantasy that I planned and executed. It was so awesome I still can't believe I pulled it off. Then I realized that Tom had playfully pushed me passed what I thought were my limits and made a much more intense experience out of the whole thing. I'm defiantly going to try more of these although, I can't imagine topping this, but it doesn't matter. It's all awesome naughty fun.
I picked up the phone and called Tom. "So Tom, I got my dress and the note". . Finally, I said, "so when should we to plan another adventure?"
- COMMENTS
flash4me9almost 12 years agoGreat story...felt like I was there! I'd really like to read more, so please don't wait too long to write the next instalment.
I'd also like Tina to be on her own...without Tom or anyone else directly involved in her adventures. That makes the "risk" higher and hotter plus it makes it easier to become part of the story for the reader IMHO.
TIA and keep up the great work!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoReally great story. She is daring and obviously enjoys what she is doing.
I'd like to read about Tina shopping naked in a supermarket---maybe with a little light touching or groping. I can envision a stock boy running a finger up her butt crack when she bends over to pick something off a bottom shelf.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis is the best real exhibitionist story I've read in a few years. I don't usually comment on stories and never provide any criticism for stories I don't care for at all, so please know I wouldn't be saying anything unless the story really stood out to me.
The only problem, to me, is the character of Tom. He only serves to take over the story and to detract from the character of Tina. Characters like Tom are often in these exhibitionist stories and as soon as you wrote him into existence, I knew everything about him, exactly what he was going to do and that I wouldn't like him.
Great exhibitionist stories, as this one mostly is, are soloist perspective stories where we get to really feel what the main character is going through in the moment. Reading as a character loses their self control (or at least, their inner know better than) to feed their inner desire to be exposed is very arousing. Characters like Tom cheapen this effect as they turn the story into their own perverse stories of control and manipulation.
Imagine if Tina had decided on her own "I'm already past the point of no return, I'm feeding off this energy and excitement, let's take this extra detour to get to me exit plan", and then once she gets her dress back in whatever way, "this is so amazing, no reason to immediately get dressed, I'll just take that long walk back through the parking lot to my car" , then after getting herself off in the car "still feeling it, don't want to this to end, I've driven topless before how can I force myself to drive around naked? I'll throw the dress out the window once I get on the road." Finally, after all of that, the sinking realization later on of "what am I doing? I'm driving into town where people know me and I'm naked, what was I thinking? Why couldn't I resist back at the mall?"
Of course, she should make it back inside to her house all the same, this time. The difference is, now Tina has her own taste for this life and has pushed herself far beyond what she ever thought she would do and we can watch her evolve into an even braver, stronger character who will do who knows what, with who knows who, at who knows where. As it is now, it will just feel like the continuing story of Tom's manipulation over Tina, pushing her by his pace. We know he can't be trusted (yes, he refused to have sex with her which was the one good thing written for him that I'm thankful for but what he did was still crummy) and there's just no satisfying way to write him to have a better idea of what Tina's desires are than Tina herself.
That's just my take. Very good story overall with good pacing, structure and the character of Tina.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis is a great story! Well written and exciting. I could feel the nerves and anxious butterflies as she plunged the dress over the side. Can't wait for the next installment.
