Marie Ch. 05

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EdandMarie
EdandMarie
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"I miss you too. Good night."

The phone went dead and I set it down. I sat in my hotel room for a long time thinking about our conversation. I came to the conclusion that I really wanted Marie to be naughty. I also decided that as much as I enjoyed the evening reviews and the limited visuals I got in the audition, I definitely wanted to be an active participant and only an occasional spectator from this point on.

There was a plan brewing in my head, but I didn't have all the particulars yet. Tomorrow night, seeing everything in person would put a lot of the pieces in place. It would be the start of what I hoped to be an interesting new chapter in both our lives. To be continued...

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desirelitdesirelitalmost 14 years ago
Hot

Oh, ball boiling hot. Makes me want to do community theater!

JuLeeJuLeeover 14 years ago
I believe!!!!!

OMFG! what a story, hope you can imagine the state of arousal I was in after reading. I just hope you enjoyed my stories as much as I do yours. HAPPY NEW YEAR! and all best in 2010. JuLee

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hot story

Good story for your first time writing erotica. Like some of the other reviewers, I would like to see each chapter posted a bit closer together rather than having to wait several weeks between chapters. I've read many of the stories on Literotica and this one definitely is original!

newtype2525newtype2525over 14 years ago
Love this!

Don't you dare stop! I want to hurt with passion for at least 5 more chapters! Thanks for the incredible series so far and thanks in advance for the rest to come!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I agree

I agree with wath the last guy said! This is lik watching a dance of seduction. The Marie is seduced by the lure of the sexuality of the performance. Ed is seduced by the ludeness of his own fantasy of see his wife exposed sexually in the play. We the readers are seduced by the voyurisum of it all as the story unfolds before us. Pleas edon'r keep us waiting so long for the next chapter.

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