Marie's Bar and Girl

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Longwalk
Longwalk
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Next Marie poured two glasses. She passed one to Fred as she knelt down to the floor across from the three. "Well, I've shown you mine. After you finish your drinks, you can show me yours."

Marie's Bar and Girl was not about to close any time soon.

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26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago
This idiot

Thinks he has a bright new idea for a cuck and whorewife story. Same old garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cute idea - not bad writing.

Not as good as ythebadger's stories though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good

I liked the story and I hope there is a chapter two or even three to go with it.

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Firstly - at least decide who's telling the story.

'They got the first tee time on one of the two Foxfire courses and played by ourselves.'

'Marie and Fred agreed that we were looking forward to tomorrow's round '

Secondly, there were places where you moved freely from past to present tense.

Thirdly, the story was poor anyway.

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