Mary Louise Ch. 01

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Feeling defeated, Mary Louise went upstairs to her room. In the dresser mirror she saw for the first time what her parents had seen. Her lips were all swollen again, and her hair was messed up. It was puffy in some places and not others, as if fingers had run through it. Looking at her shirt she realized that Rowdy’s accident earlier had caused wrinkles in her blouse, but only over her breasts. And now, the breast he had given his attention to in the car had a hard, taut nipple, which poked out more than half an inch defiantly beneath the lightweight fabric. She looked like a slut.

Crying softly, she pulled her clothes off and tossed them on the floor. Crawling in bed, she soon fell asleep.

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
Salon perm ..... Make over ..... Beautiful

Curtsies ..... Love it .... Very sexy all in all and the perm make over is best .... Yes a poodle perrm with shaved nape and baby girl bangs soooo cute - I consider this for me too

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
weirdo.

This story was truly disturbing. I fail to understand and our attain any understanding of this story. She had her hair cut like an old lady. Disturbing. She doesn't wear a bra under her mothers demands. Extremely perverted. And she fucks a 25 year old man. I truly dislike this story and it makes me more than disinterested in your work. I did how ever, enjoy some of your other work, and hope you will continue it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very sick story

But hey, how about an alternate ending?

Mary Louise finally snaps at her mother's Stepford Wives, false, lying, domineering cheerful act, grabs the scissors from her aunt's salon and stabs her mother in the neck with them!

Now that would be an appropriate response :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sick story but...

I think I missed the impregnation part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Slow start but builds nicely

very nice beginning

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