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Master laughed. "You think you could take on both of them?"
"I might," I said.
"I could arrange a slave-swap," Master said.
"Oh," I said with alarm.
"Thinking of chickening out?" Master teased. "Beware of your fantasies, my little slut. I'm the kind of man who can make almost any dream come true."
"Bernadette can take a lot of punishment," I said.
"Only from them," Master replied. "I don't fully understand it. Some slaves lap up pain; after being broken in they spend their whole lives searching for more. But for some, like Bernadette, it's an expression of a particular relationship. She's never had S&M sex with anybody but those two men and I bet if anything happened to split them up she wouldn't turn up on the club circuit. She'd live alone, or find a straight man somewhere and live a normal life. But I've seen her so black and blue she was nearly as dark as her masters."
"I'd be like that," I said. "I wouldn't want anybody to beat me but you."
"That's because you love me," Master said triumphantly, "Every bit as much as I love you."
"No, I don't," I replied, peevishly.
"Yes, you do, you lying bitch," Master insisted. "And I still want to marry you, whether we have children or not. But I wish I hadn't beaten you without permission. That was unforgivable."
"No, it wasn't, Master," I said sincerely. "I forgive you. You were right to beat me. Thank you for beating the truth out of me."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoIt very very clearly turned into abuse. He beat her in anger and disregarded the safe word.
It doesn’t matter that it’s a rewrite of a specific novel from a different POV, regardless of it being a story repeated what he did was still wrong. It’s ridiculous that she would just brush it off, how is she ever supposed to trust him enough to submit to him again?
I haven’t read the original story and I won’t bother wasting my time on it now, I shudder to think what pathetic excuses he comes up with for the way he’s treated her. FFS he’s supposed to be an experienced Dominant and yet we learn that not only does he in anger attempt to beat the truth out of the woman he claims to love, threatening her with a knife, disregard her safe word on top of all that he’s also sold women as sex slaves to other masters as though he actually owned them. For TPE to exist consent still has to be given by the sub otherwise the Dom is just an amoral criminal. There was no indication that these other subs were treated properly, like human beings.
He had a full on meltdown which if it hadn’t been violent would have been a childish temper tantrum.
FA_JFalmost 10 years agoBeating. Beating on danger areas. Beating beyond the safeword. Specifically and initentionally throwing the safeword back in the slaves face.
How can not answering a question, even an important one, possibly be equal to endagering life and limb. It does not matter 'what was going on in the master's mind.' I matters WHAT HE DID.
Just no. And that she was willing to just excuse it away...no.
This is well written and abhorent to read.
sdbnncover 11 years agoAuthorWhilst I, like most humans, enjoy receiving compliments about my writing, I also appreciate the concerns voiced by the two commentors who raise the issue of Dominance v. abuse that, to me, is omni-present in BDSM relationships. As is pointed out by a commentor here, this story is told from the submissive's point of view and, therefore, the submissive cannot speak to any emotional, psychological or mental issues the Dominant faced in being refused by a submissive he thought he knew so well, and in being refused by being stonewalled with a secret he hadn't suspected existed before being refused. I don't excuse the Dominant -- and he didn't excuse himself, in fact -- but even Dominants are human beings and, as such, make mistakes (just like submissives).
Again, many thanks to all who not only read, but took the time to comment.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe original author has a lot more in his writing of this chapter than this author can offer in her submissive view of this story. Go find and read the original author's story. I believe that this submissive did a very good job of presenting a submissive's view here.
I GIVE 5 STARS!!
This author has given a very good, no excellent, view of the story from a submissive view. It is well done and is very well praised for her work and interpretation of the story.
Keep up the excellent work!
Anonymousover 11 years agoAny Man who does that..forfiets the title of Master and merely becomes an abuser of women..if he does it once then he will do it again..You lost me with this episode
