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I saw a new side to her. On each of the statements, my name was next to hers. Without my knowledge or my asking, she had made me a partner in all of her business dealings. We talked a lot about our future together. We daydreamed about where we would be in five and ten years. I looked forward to growing old, wearing matching clothes and driving around the country in an RV with her.
She seemed so ready for the baby. So ready to jump feet first into the deep end that was our relationship.
Which is why it broke my heart when she left.
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To be concluded in part 3.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoA very well written story. A good romance. The lesbian bit is just an added on incidental.
I do take issue with one thing.
The Catholic church, and other churches, want their people to have babies, and the way this story is written that is a bad thing.
McKayla wants to have a baby, but as a result of her lifestyle that was highly unlikely. And we are meant to feel sorry for her.
HLD writing vicariously through McKayla, missed one extremely important point.
John Lennon, Yung, Freud and the Bible all say the same thing using different words.
Procreation is the basest most strongest urge and inspiration that humans have.
As The Beatles sang . . . all you need is love.
As The Bible says . . . be fruitful and multiply. The very first words uttered about mankind.
This is where homosexuality falls short of perfection. It denies us the basest desire of our lives. I am not saying anything about the morality or ethics of homosexuality, just that in speaking with many aged gay people, that is the one regret they have. Just like McKayla in this story. Their human line comes to a stop with them.
I get that in today's society with the marvels of modern medicine that this sadness can be a thing of the past.
But just maybe that is why God says it was not the best thing for people.
If you are gay you are denied the greatest pleasure the most fulfilling thing about living. Two things nearly all parents agree on, they had no idea of what real life was before the kid arrived. And secondly, there is absolutely no way that they can explain to anyone about the kid who has not had a kid themselves. They are unable to pass on what a gift being a parent is.
The Bible actually does say that being gay you will hurt only yourself. ( I am paraphrasing what is written and substituting the highly emotive word "sin" for hurt. I know of no one who "sins" who is not trying to heal some hurt.)
Being gay is between you and yourself. Outside of the issues of procreation, it does not affect the Church, or society, or even your parents. It is not an issue between you and God. He sees no issue. He has no expectations of us, just the sure knowledge that all mankind, each and everyone of us will fail ourselves again and again and again.
According to The Bible, if you want to blame someone for homosexuality, then blame the failing Church. Those aren't my words they are straight from The Bible. Romans chapter 1.
A R W.
ps I am not really one of those cowardly haters who spread their ignorance and hatred hiding behind a mask of anonymity. i am a Lit user whose login failed. I emailed twice for help, got no response so I just became a reader and an armchair critic.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoWell that pretty much guarantees your third chapter will be read by many, lol.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis story is one of the best ones I've read on here, and I hunt for excellent; long love stories. Truy love each character's persona and how the entertwine with the others. I am curious where the name Bretlynn came from though.
Buddy1945over 6 years agoThe story just gets better every time that I read it. True love knows no boundaries
