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Looking around she found her shredded panties and bra; completely unwearable. Her blouse was also in shreds.
Her brand new navy skirt had a large rip down the side but was still, wearable. She pulled it on unhappily noting how it showed her bare leg almost right to the waist. Picking up her now dirty jacket, she pulled it on noticing it no longer had buttons. She would have to just try to hold it closed.
Her shoes lay by the door.
Looking outside at the darkening sky she saw lightening flash across the sky and realized she would have to find her way back to the hotel, half naked, in public, during a raging thunderstorm.
- COMMENTS
cowbullsabout 11 years agoLove it but I would have liked to have read that they guys took her cherry.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThe basics of your story where promissing but the delivery was not. I feel that you tried to do to much. Keep it realistic.
Keep on writing.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agogyrl hopes you try again. she loved the idea, and being an azian tried to imagine, but the action is weak. she would not be so stupid as this. The play on words with her name was a bit lame. Capture her, enslave her, pierce and collar her, and then set her lose, and gyrl promises to juice for you!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agohero into a man instead of a piece of shit
