"I could go for that again." Meredith said. I turned and looked at her, surprised. "What? It was hot."
I just chuckled, "Well we have 10 days to find another chance to go at it." Both girls giggled in agreement.
Little did I know what the future held in that respect.
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I apologize about the slip of Jane. That's what happens with using pseudonyms. I slipped up, I apologize.
Jane?
Who the hell is Jane? You can't keep your characters straight. If this is a re-write, was yours to begin with? There are a ton of other typos as well. Maybe you should enlist an editor.
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