Biff and Charity remove the stock from Tammy's wrists and neck, and help her to her feet.
"I'm sorry, Tammy, but you fell one question short," Biff says unapologetically. "But, you do win one hundred thousand dollars, and you get a special bonus in nine months' time! How do you feel?"
"Horny," whispers Tammy, and she blushes.
Sexecutioner comes up behind her, then reaches down to pick her up in a bridal carry. She waves to the camera as he carries her offstage.
"Well, I guess he wants to make sure she's good and knocked up," Biff says with a smile. "Thanks for watching Millionaire or Mommy! We'll be back next week with another young woman who's willing to risk motherhood for a shot at one million dollars! On behalf of Charity and the rest of us at Millionaire or Mommy, we wish you a pleasant and fertile evening. Good night!"
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Hot hot story
Loved the thrill of the story and would like to read more like this one !!
great
This is a great first story!! Keep writing
bravo
A little more scintillation would be nice. But that was fun.
Liked it!
I'm always a fan of the gameshow with sex penalty niche! This one was cool and I liked the general premise.
As has been mentioned it was a little short. The payoff was expected which isn't necessarily a bad thing but I think you could have built up the tension more. Also I think the contestant gave in to the sexecutioners advances a little quickly, maybe a touch more 'relectuance' could be more exciting.
What might also be fun if there were two contestants who can directly compete and influence the fate of the other.
Overall I enjoyed the story and hope you write more. 5/5 on the basis that I enjoyed the story and would like to encourage you to do another but hopefully you'll take the feedback on board as well.more...
Awesome!
You got an awesome premise here! Keep it up!
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