Miss Taken

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His smile is devilish and he tilts his head to the side. "Probably started with a K, does it matter?"

Taking a sip of wine when he offers it, she shrugs. "Probably matters to her. If you'd gone missing from my life, I'd notice."

He shrugs and pops half a strawberry into his mouth. "She won't miss me. She's fictional."

Her jaw drops and he puts the other half of the strawberry on her tongue and closes her jaw with a gentle, caressing hand guiding her to chew, which she does thoughtfully. "Fictional?"

"I told you, honey, from the first moment I saw you, I wanted you on your knees. It was the best I could come up with short notice. Lucky for me, it worked."

She stops chewing and smiles at him, watching humor splash through whiskey eyes. "I'm really not all that bright, am I?"

"No, honey. But you're definitely worth facing assault charges. What do you want for breakfast?"

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rbloch66rbloch666 months ago

She says ‘no’ several times, makes it quite clear, in fact, and he persists in his pursuit, to the point of physically coercing her. Even though she responded in such a manner, she appears to welcome the inevitable result. Some women will crave this behaviour as they like a man who takes charge. Others will consider it rape.

Forgive me if I’m confused. But this makes no sense to me at all. How is a guy supposed to know what a woman wants if she can’t be honest about it? Could end up in serious trouble because of it.

loverandtheliarloverandtheliarover 14 years ago
Funny & Charming

Hilarious! I love the "twist" at the end...great!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just an encounter

Not much of a story, just an encounter, so I gave it 50% for great dialogue.

MarshAlienMarshAlienover 16 years ago
What wonderful dialogue!

I'm so glad I stopped by. it was an exceptional little tale, full of life and love.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Made me feel all warm and goey

Sweet, romantic, just enough suspension of disbeleif :) It made me feel ... good n hot!

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