- BDSM
- Mistress Nicole
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Click hereNicole heard a soft knock at the door. She looked at the clock. That will be Martin, right on time. She went to the front door, opening it to find a tall man, well built standing there, brushing the rain off his coat.
'Martin,' said Nicole, 'right on time. Can you do chicken and avocado pasta for three tonight. Also the red room requires a quick mop and the used gags are in the bucket. You know were everything else is. Oh, and I'll take your coat.'
Martin sheepishly undid his coat to reveal a scanty French maid costume. He was still doing his training fro Mistress Nicole. She was never short of housemaids, at least one's who could be trusted to be discreet and maintain their confidentiality.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 15 years agoThe story itself was good, but your constant change of tense and perspective was very distracting and confusing.. Either have it all first person from Susan or better yet, stick with all 3rd person.
whywouldiabout 15 years agoBut the changes in the point of view were really annoying, because they were not properly introduced. It is simpler to stick to one point of view.
Keep up the good work !
