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Click hereJohn kept thinking to himself, "I'll have a hard-on all day if she keeps this up" For the next couple of weeks John stayed busy at work and Molly continued to see old friends and in her spare time work on her tan. Virtually every night was a sex filled event and as time went on John discovered two distinct things. First his guilt about having sex with his daughter almost vanished and he found himself looking forward to each evening. Even his employees mentioned what a good effect his daughter's homecoming had on him. Secondly John continued to be amazed at his daughter's sexual imagination and appetite. She liked everything and kept John completely drained. John thought that he had never slept any better and waking up next to Molly was always exciting.
First off, LEARN TO FUCKING WRITE.
Secondly, LEARN TO FUCKING SPELL.
Thirdly, LEARN TO FUCKING PUNCTUATE.
Fourthly, LEARN TO FUCKING CAPITALIZE.
And, finally, LEARN TO FUCKING WRITE.
However, you need to work on your punctuation and grammar. When two people are conversing back and forth, you need separate paragraphs for each character.
This was a really good story, and I think with a little more detail, you could have a great series!
Mzzie
I enjoyed it but it was lacking in detail where it was most needed—the sexual parts!