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Click hereShe told me to go take a shower, get cleaned up and she would fix us something to eat after she showered.
"By the way little boy." "There will be no email tomorrow morning." "Set your alarm for 9am."
"Clean yourself and be ready for when I come in at 9:30."
She then kissed me on the cheek, turned, picked up her bags, showing me her ass and walked out.
"Supper in 45 minutes little boy. Wear the panties only"!
- COMMENTS
WilliamTellsOverturealmost 14 years agoThe above is a valid question. In some areas of your story, I came across repetition after repetition, especially the use of the word cock. Nouns are valid, however substituting with some pronouns once in a while would make your story more readable and show that your vocabulary is more than you indicate. Have you noticed you sometimes use the past tense with a verb when you meant the present one? Spelling isn't too bad, however a few mistakes. Try reading your own story and it may dawn on you to observe exactly what I'm telling you. It's one thing to write a story, but remember that someone is going to read it. If the story is "stressfully" written, it will be "stressfully" read and not well received.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoHow hot a young male doesn't have a chance with moms likes our's just wait until she has the blk cock stuffing your young ass you'll love it and it's coming your way.
Socially_Ineptalmost 14 years agoDoes she have hidden cameras or something? How does she know all these things? Anyway, I can't see what she has planned for him at 9:30.
Very interesting storyline indeed!
