She leaned back in her chair and scrunched her butt forward almost up to the edge and at the same time she took a puff from the joint before handing it to me for a quick puff. She then took it back as I exhaled. She reached down to her semi erect clitoris and began to stroke it.
"Well," she said, ....."begin."
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Unnecessary rules
Whoever told ReiDeBastos that "exclamation points have no place within narrative" was wrong. After all, first-person narration is really dialogue - the narrator speaking to the audience. The other points are correct, though - this is a poorly-written and -edited story, so far.more...
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