She leaned back in her chair and scrunched her butt forward almost up to the edge and at the same time she took a puff from the joint before handing it to me for a quick puff. She then took it back as I exhaled. She reached down to her semi erect clitoris and began to stroke it.
"Well," she said, ....."begin."
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Slow
That had to be the slowest burning joint in the history of pot. It seemed to last forever.
Good Read***
Thanks for sharing.
GET A DECENT EDITOR!!
GET A DECENT EDITOR!!
He or she would catch things like:
1. Anyhow, she looked up at me from behind her sunglasses and said, "Well, your massive erection seems to have subsided. Did you rub one out while you were inside she said slyly?"
[[ Unless she actually spoke the words "she said slyly", they do NOT belong within quotation marks ]]
2. she was feeling the effects of the martini already which was already near gone!
[[ exclamation points have no place within narrative. ]]
3. "Mom! I didn't jack off! It just went away when I started looking around in the kitchen for coupons! Geese!" I answered.
[[ unless he exclaimed about the plural of the word "goose", I believe you meant "Jeez!", not "Geese!" ]]
4. "Thank you sweetie! Now you can pour yourself another one for yourself."
[[ one of those "yourself"s needs to go (probablt the first one)' ]]
5. I was smoking THIS stuff since I was 18.
[[ Should be I have been smoking THIS stuff since I was 18 -OR- I was smoking THIS stuff when I was 18. ]]
6. "I poured a glass and sat down in the lounge chair beside mom and took a sip.
[[ unless he actually spoke these words aloud, lose the opening quotation mark. If he DID speak them aloud, add a closing quotation mark. ]]
7. "Wow,COUGH..COUGH," I exclaimed.
[[ unless he actually said the words "COUGH..COUGH," they do not belong within quotation marks. ]]
...and there were lots of missing commas and such.
And all of that was just within the opening few paragraphs.
It makes your reader have to do their own editing, and distracts them from enjoying your story.more...
REMEMBER.............
haevy red lipstick on mom transferred to son,
and pregnancies happen.........
A very interesting story
While I don't care much for all the weed and booze, I sure as hell love some of the other happenings in this well-written story. The mother shows her boy her mommy-hole, the same wonderful hole between her legs he came out of and the best thing a son can ever see. Mom spreads her cunt all over the boy's body as she massages him, he actually feels his mother's open cunt-lips pressing on him--I wonder if they're leaking her juices, maybe he even gets a whiff of the sharp musky aroma and happily inhales it deep into his lungs? Oh, man. Best of all, she tells him to whack off, her boy lets his mother see his big hard cock in all its throbbing glory, what plenty of boy dream of showing off to their mother. Finally, he'll be blowing his young balls and shooting his creamy semen all over the place right in front of his own mother, a dream come true for lots and lots of boys. But wait. Mom's got a big bed. I hope and trust that real soon mother and son'll discover a much better spot--the perfect spot--for the boy to shoot his sperm up into.more...
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