"I love you too. And, Mom-"
"Yeah?"
"I wouldn't mind doing it again. I mean, if that client ever wants more photos."
"Oh, really." She took her eyes from the road long enough to shoot him a glance, tried to see if he was joking. He didn't look like he was joking. "And what if he doesn't?"
"I don't know," he said, in a tone that said he knew, but wasn't willing to say. A tone that meant yes.
And there it is, Melinda, she thought. You've opened the door. Now we'll have to find out what's on the other side.
"Well," she said. "I guess we'll just see."
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Great story
Glad to know there are more chapters coming. It's so real.
5 *'s and FS status
Love it
I'm glad to know there is more to come soon. I will look forward to it!
There are several more chapters coming. They're all written and submitted and should be coming out over the next several days. :)
love it...but..
great storyline so far and very well written....but....unfair to tease us with such short chapters, PLEASE post more
don't stop
Do. Not. Stop. This is excellent.
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