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They sat quietly for a few seconds. "So you hired two lawyers and a hotel room," Pavlina said to Nate, "and that is only what we know about." Nate nodded. "Who pays for all this?"
"I guess I do," shrugged Nate.
"So you will pay us 5,000 euros each, our airfare, our lawyers' fees, and our hotel, food, and clothing, and the deal is the same for us?" Pavlina queried skeptically. Again, Nate just nodded. "Why do you do all this?" Pavlina challenged.
"Why not?" Nate shot back. Pavlina was silent. "Was any of this your fault?" Nate interrupted the silence.
"You are not like most men," Pavlina declared, sounding it more like an accusation than a compliment. She turned the TV volume up and returned to her reality TV show.
At six in the evening the girls retired to the bathroom to brush their teeth and don their reclaimed makeup. Briana wore her red skirt and white shirt, and Pavlina went in her basic black outfit. They walked less than a block to a nearby restaurant. The girls' skimpy outfits were out of place with the upscale linen table cloths and fine place settings. Patrons at neighboring tables were either intrigued or scandalized, but no one ignored Nate and his two lovely female companions.
This evening they ate their meal with greater ease, now that Nate was speaking German, so Briana was not awkwardly translating. They ordered coffee and dessert, and then returned to the hotel without incident.
They killed time in the hotel room watching some TV until it was bed time. Nate stripped naked, and the girls did the same. He retrieved his camera, lay on the bed, propped himself up on the pillows, and told the girls to suck him while he shot a POV video. Briana and Pavlina kneeled on either side of him while he handled the camera, which proved more difficult than he imagined. He kept shaking and moving it, rendering what he knew would be an annoying playback experience. He took lots of zoom shots of the girls' heads bobbing up and down over his 7 inch cock, and lots of full frame shots of either girl and of both girls together. When Briana went into action over his cock while she was on her knees, her large, firm, hanging tits would start oscillating in motion, and Nate zoomed in on that action also.
Nate did is best to stay focused on his camera duties as he exploded into Pavlina's mouth, and then he made the camera pay special attention to the girls swapping his cum back and forth many times under his direction before both they both swallowed down their share.
Nate put the camera aside, and invited the girls to lie down beside him. He pulled the bed covers over their naked bodies, and they slowly drifted off to sleep.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 8 years agoOk let's see, nate grabed victims wrist = possible fingerprints found during autopsy.
as mentioned, nate used cc @ restaurant with two scantly glad girls.
Resturant investigation finds nate identity.
Nates as former Canadian forces fingerprints are on file.
Current job will pull up, as address and other info.
In nates appartment is the audio records of the unlawful prostitution proprsal. I be live she mentions her name in these recordings, Leading to the identity of the scantatly glad girls and their AeD Status.
Most likely the German government will then freeze nates account, and track his recent cc activity.
he has his laptops with him so they can contact his ISP and posibly get the internet id's of these, tracking their use in the hotel.
If they find them at the hotel they find the sex videos.
The only bright spot here is that as a civilian advisor of the joint task force he is most likely protected under the status of forces agreement. (Sofa)
Anonymousover 8 years agohow this tale turns to focus more on what the title suggest this story is about is obvious. The big secret is why Brianna and her mother stopped talking (I think that lending someone money she stole from her mother is a bunch of bs), we already know that both Brianna and her mother had a crush on Nate, and in a sense Brianna's mothers crush formed from knowing her daughter had a crush on him. I believe this might play a big role in what's to come. I may believe to know the key point that will lead this story towards the mother daughter aspect but I have absolutely no clue how you (the author) will get us there. I can't wait to find out.
Also I'm not sure if someone might have mentioned it in a previous comment but I realized that your story implicates that Brianna's and Nate's first intimate encounter took place when she babysat for his kids (when she was 16). At first I thought maybe the encounter took place when she was of age but when Brianna corrected Nate on how long it's been (12years I believe) Nate concluded that Brianna was 28 years old, meaning the last time he saw her she was still 16 years old. I only mention this because I think the whole underage factor is not something literotica permits.
Asides from that you've got a great story and I can't wait to finish it
Anonymousover 8 years agoI rarely give out 5* reviews... Not because there are not a lot of good writers here, but Good is NOT Great!
I think 5*s should be reserved for the truly exceptional, what you have written up to this point certainly qualifies - it actually has plot and character development to go along with the sex.
Can't wait to see where this is going next. Keep it up!
deltablondeover 8 years agoAuthorThank you for your comment. All I can say is, I have completed the entire story. The remaining parts are with Literotica waiting to be published. Read on, and the title will become clear. As for how that unfolds ... spoilers !!!
Deltablonde
Anonymousover 8 years agoI'm really loving this tale. I am a bit confused about the title though. How do the mothers factor into this? From the background it would seem neither mom would be up for any mother of the year awards. Is there some future interaction with said mothers? I guess if you keep writing, we'll find out, huh? Great job.
