Cumming soon chapter 3!
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Great Work
Very erotic and extremely sexy and taboo. Excellent work.. Write MORE please?
CH. 2 IS EVEN BETTER THAN CH. 1: BOTH ARE VERY EROTIC, PLAUSIBLE & INTELLIGENTLY CONCEIVED & DESERVE
... 5 stars (each).
HOT!!! Story****
Thanks for sharing.
Keep going
I like the pace to your story unlike some of the other comments. You've done a good job developing the characters in a relatively short time frame. The ending in chapter two may have been abrupt, but that just keeps us looking forward to the next part.more...
Chapter 3
Hello all,
Just to let you know I am almost finished with chapter 3, it just needs
editing and submitting.
I appreciate your comments about brevity and this will be a
longer update. Poor Bobby finally gets put out of his misery,
at least for now, but this story has another 7-8 chapters to go
so prepare for a LOT more to cum.
As always please leave your comments and ratings
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