Mum's Friends Ch. 05

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Jack1107
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May then took Paul's cock and went down on him. Paul got into position and went down on May. May's pussy was wet. Paul Paul started to suck her hard clit as he finger fucked her. May had opened her legs wide and was pushing her pussy against Paul's fingers. Paul was taking some of May's cum and was lubing her ass with it. He could easily now get four fingers inside her ass. May had raised her ass up and was now pushing against the fingers inside her ass. May said, "Ass fuck me. This is the first time in my life that I have ever looked forward to being ass fucked."

Paul turned her around then slid his cock into her pussy. After a few thrusts, he slipped his cock gently inside her ass. Paul soon had a powerful rhythm going. He was rubbing May's clit as he ass fucked her. May was enjoying every thrust Paul was making. After ten minutes Paul pulled out of her throbbing ass and went into her doggy style. May was gripping Paul's cock firmly as he rode her. Fifteen minutes later Paul came. May had lost count of the number of times she had cum. They lay under the covers kissing and cuddling. They were both asleep five minutes later.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hair not bald.

Woman vs girl

Worried about hair?

Should be combing through with fingers as foreplay.

Scent better with hair.

Fisting!

Sooner or later stretched out won't feel it when insert dick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Repetition

In one paragraph, you have the name Paul 8 times and May 7 times. The readers already know the characters, there is no requirement to constantly identify them by name. Take out the excess wording, especially the names, and combine the sentences of similar thoughts/actions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Poorly written

The whole series is very poorly written and I couldn't read the whole series from start to finish. Try taking a creative writing course so that you can improve your technique.

I'm sorry if this is harsh, but I had to vote this only one star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
beulahthebrit

I'm sorry, I've really tried with these, but they are truly awful. Sentance's no longer than about ten words, formative, repetative and almost child like. Please, please no more, have you not wondered why there are so few comments to your postings.987A

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