My Brother's Back Ch. 02

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"Who are you?" I request.

"Gus; who are you?" he mumbles back. I open my wallet and pull out a few hundreds. I hold one out to him as his eyes go wide. I put one bill in his hand.

"Look after Angela. I'll be back every few days to make sure she's okay and we'll settle accounts then. Can I trust you to keep your end of the deal?" I inquire.

He looks down at the hundred in his hand then back at me.

"Take care of Angela; got it," Gus promises me. I run a hand through Angela's hair.

"I'll come back," I tell her before taking Regina by the arm and head back to the car. I can feel Angela's eyes bore into my back as I get in and leave.

We are not half way down the block when Regina attacks me. She's so violent that I have to pull over and defend myself.

"You Bastard!" she screams as she flails away. "You fucker, you cocksucker, you total fuckwad!" she keeps at it until her words get lost in the sobs.

I'm a heartless bastard.

"I figured I'd give you a nice image to think about next time you go powder your nose Regina," I taunt her.

"Bastard," she sobs.

"Every night you coke up is one more night your daughter sits back in some cold room all alone. I thought you deserved to see that," I dig away.

"I don't care," she lies.

"Your daughter looks a like you, especially in the eyes. I bet she's pretty smart too," I suggest. She's beyond anything but blubbering at this point. I wait a bit for her to wind down.

"Why?" she whimpers.

"As you said I'm a bastard. You don't get a free ride on this. Either have the guts to show up and tell Angela you are a coke-addicted whore who is never coming back for her, or you can figure out something else to do," I reply. She can clearly see that I'm not going to stop verbally slapping the shit out of her.

"What now?" she sniffs.

"Give me a blowjob," I instruct her. If anything Regina looks even worse. "You are a whore, I paid you for a blowjob, and that is how it goes." Defeated, she reaches for my zipper, but I stop her hand.

"Let's get a cup of coffee first," I offer. "You can blow me when we are done."

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RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 1 year ago
I amend my previous statement.

For chapter one I stated all of the friends deserved to die including Jewel for her part in the drug ring,but alas I think Jewel got so caught up in coersion and peer pressure by the others that she lost sight of what was important,but when Christian set her straight about what she did to him she seen the error of her ways.So I think she deserves a second chance.

As for Cowan,Alton and the rest of them yes I believe they should all die at the hands of Christian or even a rival drug cartel.Finally the ending where Christian took Regina to see the hell her daughter faced everyday was a real wakeup call for Regina and Christian made her relive her worst moments of losing her daughter to drugs and prostitution,some may call it "Tough Love" but for Regina it made her see what was truly important.

I wish this had had a chapter three to finalize how things turned out,whether Christian took out the rest of the drug kingpins,and also his highschool friends turned enemies,and also that Black Special Agent who made it clear she wasn't gonna let Christian walk away alive,so I hope he has a special way to get rid of her.

Finally as for Serendipity I am not sure why but she seems like an interesting character that Christian could have so much fun with.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
WASTE

This story should have been finished!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hope you get your shit together

Saw your message. Hope you get your issues straitened out before to long. I like your stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
the rest of the story

why didn't you finish the story?? it is an excellent premise, and you could embellish the story even more...i really like your writing skills so you should accomodate an admirer and finish theis story...i will be looking for new episodes in the future...crabbo71@aol.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I really like this story, please continue it. Good characters, good balance, pretty good sex.

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