- Romance
- My Compass
- Page 2
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Click hereI just looked at her for a long while. Finally I murmured, "maybe I was."
She looked at me for just as long. "Not anymore," she said, then rolled to me and kissed me and held me.
My chest felt fine.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoI gave it a '5'. The story had a great idea, and the story line proceeded nicely. Then, you forgot to give the readers closure. She had no luggage, no transportation, and no wearing apparel. There was no indication she was not just passing through. Any comment they made could have said this time, it was different from all the other times that his chest had stopped hurting for a few days.
Other than that, it would have been a '6'. Congrats!
Anonymousover 8 years agoI'm going to read the rest of your stories.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI LOVED the beginning! But the introduction of the female character moved way to quickly to sex. The sex was too quick, and all about the man. Slow that down a little. More foreplay, more mental arousal. (I am a lady, and liked the man's journey- I wanted to see him treat her like his queen in bed)
bizkid64over 9 years agoEnjoyed this. Not nearly as intense as your other work (without taking away any from either). Just a nice read with a happy ending.
