My Fair Slut Ch. 05

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Boratus
Boratus
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Jeff seemed exhausted.

"Have a seat." Master said offering the couch and a beer. Jeff took both and breathed a relaxing sigh. "I think you deserve a reward for all you did for Me, buddy."

"You'll get my bill." Jeff laughed.

Master laughed too. "I can't wait. But how about a bonus now?"

"What do you mean?" he asked.

"Slut, suck Jeff's cock for him."

"Yes, Master." I said getting up and walking over to Jeff. I'll admit I was curious when he arrived. I thought that was why he was here. I kneeled in front of him and reached for his pants. He pushed me back.

"Uh, Jim, not that I'm not appreciative or anything but, she's your wife!"

"I lost My wife months ago. Now I have a slut. She's fucked more men than I'd care to think about over the last few months. I don't see why you should be denied the goods. Don't you think she's hot?"

"Yeah, but that's not the point. This just seems wrong." He argued.

"It won't once she wraps those lips around you. Trust Me."

I had managed to get his belt undone and the zipper came down easily. Jeff seemed to struggle half-heartedly wanting and not wanting it at the same time. When I closed my lips around him, though, it was over. I sucked him good, knowing Master was watching. I'd occasionally glance over at Him to make sure He was watching and then smile proudly. Jeff came in my mouth and I drank down every drop. Master tastes better. I cleaned his cock and then rose and kissed him and said thank you. Then I came and knelt by Master, nuzzling against His leg for comfort and security.

Master is going to teach Paul a lesson. He deserves it for what he did to us. I'll help anyway I can. I looked forward to all the delightful things we could do to him. But my mind also wandered away to my mother. She was so sad and lonely and unable to reach her true potential as a slut. I had to show Jim to her as He is now: Husband and Master. I'll show her you can have it all. My mother is still so beautiful I think she deserves to have it too. Who knows? Maybe Master will find her pleasing and show her how wonderful He is. I'm sure that will make her happy.

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Yes, yes, I did it again. I delayed the confrontation I know you're waiting for. Well, don't worry, next chapter it's on! Or maybe it's just beginning. I don't know. This story seems to be writing itself. You want to know how it ends? Well so do I! Please vote before you go (it's just 2 clicks!) and feedback is greatly appreciated.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Splendid Story

Well paced, well written, and if it were on paper the pages will get spotty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A slip up?

Unless I missed it you’ve left out the bit where he tried to tell her that Paul had been using subliminal messages to control their behaviour. At the end of this chapter she’s happy and in love with her husband again, when told from his POV he wasn’t happily in love with his wife. He hadn’t acknowledged that she’d been mind controlled too even though he (thought he had) instigated it.

I’m hoping he realises his error in a future chapter otherwise he’s just going to be a self entitled jerk. Again the suggestion of including her mother implies incest, I really hope not because it doesn’t improve the story it’s a just a pointless addition.

wicked62wicked62about 7 years ago

I gave you 5 stars because the first half was good. But the second half was just a repeat. Bigger isn't always better. Keep up the good work. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
WHY SO WORDY

Good story but six pages -- when so much is repeated & told in more words than needed. I understand story development but you write like being paid by the word - great idea but too much effort to find the story line lost in the words

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Mixed wonderfulness

Rarely does punishment turn me on, but this multi-layered story with flashbacks and the same scenes from different points of view was both interesting and hot. I am annoyed by the typos but them I am a nitpicker. Thanks for a hot and exciting story with depth and character. I wish the cruelty didn't turn me on so much.

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