I could tell she was thinking hard about it, she squirmed as she thought. "Hum," she said, "I like it, let me think about it mom, I'll have a better feel for it by tomorrow morning." She smiled as she kissed me goodnight.
I smiled and kissed her in return. I rolled over while thinking to myself, oh momma Raye, what have you done? What is Dan going to think about all of this? Shit!
I'm pretty sure both the boys and Abby would enjoy such a tryst, and I'd be there just in case...hum?
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want more
waiting for chapter 3. please!
Good tale
Problem with writing though.. Getting a proofreader would be an excellent idea. Please don't stop.
So good...So long !
The story is awesome and the plot's cool but the waiting is long ! Could you make it faster for the other chapter ? Thanks and i loved it !
Good to see the return of this one!
I really enjoyed reading this -- please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter!
Very well done, raiderdrm -- five stars.
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