My Friend's Mom Eva

For your effort I gave you a 5

and thanks for pissing off the asshole annony!

give it up

u can't finish a tale.
1 star for every tale you feebly attempted to write

Fantastic story ad fat as it goes. Must have another chapter, don't think they are finished with each other.

this story is really mixed up

just like the characters in it.

It is obvious she has come unhinged, just like the door to her bedroom.
the metaphor continues when we are told that he uses a screwdriver to nail the repaired fixture making her bedroom secure once again.
I might not like it, but I can understand, after the years of verbal and physical abuse, she needs to be in control. But I think it went a bit too far.

I also think she is overly concerned about how her friend, his mother, would react to them being together, after all his mother sent him to her with the admonition.
""You look after her, she's not got Mike around anymore. She's lonely, and a really nice woman, so treat her like that. She needs the attention.""

next?more...

Nicely Done

I enjoyed the story, and hope you make another part to it. Be happy to edit it for you too.