After the camera had clicked I looked over at my mother and caught her eye. "And do they?" my mom asked. All of a sudden there was a challenge in her eyes. Ohhh fuck!
THE END
This is the end of Part 1 of Tommy Campbell's story. I'm planning a Part 2 which I hope to have out soon. It will follow Tommy and Krissie after they return from their honeymoon. Will Bonnie bear Tommy's child? What will Greg do? Will Tommy be able to resist cuckolding another man?
I'd love to know how you liked this one -- and any suggestions you might have for the sequel - please take the time to cast your vote. And I would certainly appreciate hearing your comments -- either below or send them to me by e-mail at the CONTACT tab on my profile.
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Definitely needs a sequel
Hope that your able to post a sequel to this story soon. In it you should have Tommy take his Mother, keep her womb full of his virile seed until she turns up pregnant too. as well as being his submissive Mother/Slut. Just like Bonnie, his Mother-in-Law. Tommy could also get his Mother, and Bonnie to have sex together after their both pregnant, then have a 3-way with him. Then Tommy could have a four-way with Krissie, Bonnie, his own Mom, and himself. In-fact you could have Tommy knock up Krissie on their Honeymoon. Can't wait to see a sequel as soon as possible. Keep up the good work too.more...
Another
Will you make another story that goes with this one?
Definitely needs a sequel.
I Just Don't Get It
I hate cuckold stories, they all drip with meanness and contempt and I have
No use for such people, man or woman. At least, and it's very least, this one has an acknowledgment of some dim awareness of getting off on holding someone in such contempt but it kills erotic thoughts in this reader's head like a cold bath. Write a story about how how later in life he is appalled at what he'd done, because this kind of character attribute can poison a person. And no, I have never been 'cucked', and am waiting for that story to be written, when a person's true nature loses all he loved.more...
We want a sequel 😃
I have to admit, I enjoyed this story.
It kept my attention from start to end.
I realise the author is not completely 100%, but this story really could do with a sequel.
Considering the amount of time the author has been inactive, I won't be holding my breath.
Scouries, sir, if you read this, I hope you are back to full health, and firing on all cylinders very soon.
thank youmore...
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