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Click hereAs the movie was over, we both rushed to the exit. As we were heading back home, I was getting a turn on thinking of Sarath's masculinity and the enormous size of his manhood. Then I decided to end up all this tonight. We went to home and it was almost 10 pm. I said to him, "Sarath! You're not going home as we have to dinner together."
"Is this a request or an order?" he enquired jokingly.
"This is an order from your Bhabi." I said naughtily and then said,"
After half and hour the children went to sleep. Then I went into the kitchen and made us each a nice cup of tea. We sat and talked while we sipped our tea, and asked him, "Sarath, you didn't tell me, how can I repay you?"
He looked at my eyes and said, "Shall I tell you, Bhabi, how can you repay?
"Yes I'm waiting eagerly," I said.
Your character and plot development are terrific! I look forward to reading more. Much thanks!
yekollu. go ahead.
dont care about the comments.
i am with you. we need indain writer. this is a good start and i hope you will be a great writer in few months.
Gave you 25% for taking the time to write this. But it is really unreadable due to the intolerable amount of grammar problems. You should really learn the language before you try to write it
A lot of repetition to the story, going over things that were already explained, But all in all it's a good start of a series. I hope that the next chapter moves along to the goal of her getting fucked by her lover.