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It wasn't until Ashley's loud moans died away, turning into desperate pants, and her ass fell back down to the blankets, unable to push toward his hand anymore, did he stop. For a second. He pushed back into her, and pulled a few more drops of blood from her quivering body, as he started finger her again. No moaning, only tiny whimpers, barely audible; she was going to pass out. But her petite pussy was still clenching in spasms, and coating his fingers in her cum, so he continued, forcing her to cum again, and again, until she made no more noise at all.
He licked the wound, healing it, and sat up. Ashley had passed out.
"Uh, shit. Too far." He looked down at her body, lean, lithe, and he looked at her juices literally dripping off of his fingers, glistening in the blue light.
Antoinette was still going. Julee's head was turned so she could look at him, and she tried to lift her hand out to him, eyes begging, as if looking for help, before her hand collapsed. She was getting fingered in the same way, maybe even harder, Antoinette working her hand up and down enough Jack could see the ballerina's ass and thighs lightly jiggling with the harsh, wet slapping sounds. And then she went limp, eyes closing.
The Prince sat up, wiped her lips with a single finger, and smiled at Jack. She tugged on his leash, and pulled him toward her, until he was on his knees in front of her.
She took his shoulders, and pushed him down onto his back again. With a long sigh, she cuddled up against his side, pressing her breasts into his chest and side as she set her cheek on his shoulder, his leash in her hand on his waist.
"Be careful, my love," she said. "It is impressive for one as young as yourself to learn to control their vitae so masterfully. It is normally a decade into their second lives, before Kindred learn to enhance the more subtle aspects of the Blush of Life, such as sex drive."
"I guess I'm a quick study."
"Indeed. But, again, be wary. Sexuality, and many other pleasures, are pleasurable due to their frequent absence. Take care to not become as some Daeva do, and spend every night amidst the legs of others." She slid her body further up, heavy breasts sliding along his chest up to his collar, as she leaned in to plant a kiss on his lips, then his nose, then his forehead.
"Sorry, I was just trying to... you know..."
"I am partly to blame, of course. And I was one such Daeva, who spent so many nights lost, addicted, to sex. I have learned control since then, since the tale I told you of my ghoul. I will keep you in check. If you go too far, I will tie you to the bed, and tease you with my body for weeks, before letting you finally cum. That should re-sensitize you to the simple pleasure of a single orgasm."
Oh shit.
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~~Author's Note~~
Part 5 done, and enough sex scenes for a little bit. Part 5 felt a bit like a 'filler' story to me, honestly, but it was needed to build the groundwork for the upcoming madness.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 months agoIn my humble opinion, that was the best sex scene thus far. 5*. Very creative. Can’t wait to get back to the storyline :)
NovusAnimus11 months agoAuthorThanks for the compliment!
1 - It would have damaged the erotica a bit too much, I think, to give Jack an aversion to some minor (very minor) bdsm elements like chains.
2 - I enjoy it when Ann and Jack are equals in the bed as well, but a HUGE part of MLV is exploring the many angles of sexuality.
3 - Jack not telling Ann about his anger issues is a multi-layered problem due to his youth and his pride. It may feel too long to you, but in reality it's only been a short time in story time. As for not liking Eric, I dunno what to tell you. Some people love Eric the asshole. XD
4 - Jack does train with Julias, and I've written a couple scenes about it, but I mostly don't write the scenes (they'd get boring). I thought I implied them, but if you thought he wasn't training, perhaps I wasn't. I'll try and correct this.
5 - The covenants are factions, so joining more than one was never possible, though Damien's riding a weird line right now. And vampires can get married, it's just seen as silly and quaint. Marriage is a very human, short-sighed concept, and vampires get that. But, particularly twisted vampire couples COULD feed each other their blood, get each other addicted to each other, and brainwashed to love each other. Very frowned upon by Kindred society, but it sometimes happens when a Romeo and Juliet situation arises.
6 - I can't spoil what'll happen with Ashley and Julee. They'll be around every so often, though.
Anonymous11 months agoFirst of hello,
I‘m reading your story since the second book started and I love this story. It is the best after TSM but I think 2nd is still pretty good :D
I wanted to comment for the first time on lit, because since book 4 there were a few points that bother me.
1st
I really thought that after Jack saved himself / was rescued from the hunters he would have some mental problems with being in these bsdm kinks. Of course he has great trust in Anni but no human mind (and jack was clearly not old enough to brush it of) would be able to just ignore that.
2nd
More of a personal one: I much prefer the more romantic setting between Jack and Anni instead of the Bdsm. Of course it fits Annis status and Jack in the sense that he is not as mighty even though he is a venture, but that is also the reason it is so heartwarming when they are near equals in the bedroom. It also translats better to more meaningfull conversations between them. These are a huge part why I think this is such a good story - the dynamic between Anni and Jack especially in the start is a huge plus.
3rd
I know that this ark was not als flashy, because it was kind of a setup for part 6 (hype 100) but there are some things that really didnt fit in the normal flow of the story. First of the unwillingness of Jack to speak with Anni about his anger problems is kind of taxing for me. It got a vibe of bad storytelling because I suspect it is a needed plotpoint for a later twist. It just feels too long for Anni to notice or Jack to tell depending on what would fit better.
Also with the uprising of Eric (who i really dislike for some reason) I just dont see where his Pov is leading. It just feels like randome text sometimes. Don‘t get me wrong - most of the time we see thinge from him when it matters like in the nightmares etc. but sometimes he feels like a character who’s sole role it is to say “fuck this shit“ or “I‘m here so I must be a dick“. His presence or Pov sometimes feels like he is just there to be a brick, not to deepen the plot etc.
4th
Another thing that bothers me is that Jack should be training somehow. Not physically of course but his vampire skills - shouldn‘t he have some kind of training with anni or his sire to deepen his understanding of these skills in a time of danger?
5th
As far as a remember Jack and Anni never had a conversation about him joining her. There was one a long time ago between Mire and Anni but i should have crossed Jacks mind as well. He wants to know much of Anni but is ok with not at least asking about the possibility of joining two fractions. It wouldn‘t work most likely but he should at least ask. They can change fractions but it was never explaind that you could only be in one.
Also is a wedding a thing between vamps? I think there was something like “We cant live togehter because it would hurt your position in the Invictus“ or something but a wedding was never the talkingpoint as far as i know.
6th
The appearance of Annis gouhls got me in a good mood - i really like them and it would be great to have more of them outside the bedroom. It often got mentioned for them to be turned which would be a good way to get them more into the story.
I think that this coverd it all so far - I know it might seem like i had a lot to critic but some of it is really highlevel. You story is great and don‘t let you tell otherwise!
I‘m sorry if there is poor grammar or spelling in some places - I‘m no nativ speaker and hope it was understandeble what i had to say. If I got something wrong then please point me to the chapter where i missed something.
With best regards
ZeroC
Anonymous11 months agoYou should have made Antoinettes two ghoul companions to be twins for extra fictional hotness
Anonymous11 months agoI wish each chapter was twice as long as twice as detailed, both the sex chapters and the actiony chapters. I have always preferred when things move slowly and everything takes it time.
