"Maybe I'm just happy to see you."
"Okay. I'm officially calling bullshit." She sighed in frustration. "At least tell me if I was right about him having a small cock."
"Hmmm." I pretended to be lost in thought, drawing out the suspense. "Let's just say ... it wasn't what I was expecting."
Donna's jaw dropped. "Are you telling me that fat bastard has a fat—mmmph."
Before she could finish, I covered her lips with mine, cradling her head and kissing her deeply. After a few moments of locking tongue, I pulled away, leaving her bewildered.
"Okay, chick," she said, cocking her head to one side with a suspicious gaze. "That was a nice try at distracting me, but I know I'm not getting the whole story. So just go ahead and spill it. What are you hiding?"
"Nothing," I said, leaning in for another kiss. "Not anymore."
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GREAT writing!
Really fantastic development! And you possess an awesome vocabulary as well. This story, and the preceding ones, were WELL worth my 5 star ratings! Please keep it up (the stories, I mean ;)) and God help the mindless wastes complaining. Two thumbs up... WAY up!!more...
You,accomplished a hot jerk off story that had a positive moral about honest communication. I disagreed with the premise that, because she could get lost in the lust of the moment, it made her disengenuous about her primary identity - that is the kind of sexist BS that justifies all kinds of male misbehavior - but you handled the sex in a hot way, and the emotional evolution of the primary character was mostly well handled.more...
great ending
I take back my jumped the shark comment....hot finish to the story.
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key parties are a thing of the past, so is Russian roulette. Gerry is right if you want to swing, you must be honest with each other first. Then you can set your limits, what ever they may be, .and stick to them. must communicate all the time.
Sharing sexual experiences does not need to change how you love each other.
For all the angry anons, ptptptptptptptptp.more...
Coming off your first story
With the black dudes raping the porn actress, I guess this is a step up. You just set a really low bar.
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