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Maya looked at the chocolate male that stood before her. He was built and attractive. It was no wonder the two creatures were attached to him. He seemed to have a kind heart too...and his magic energy was through the roof.
"Hmmm. And you would follow everything we say?" She asked.
Ben cleared his throat. "uhh sure?"
The agent put her hands on her hips and sighed.
"Look we were working on a project years ago to have Foster Homes. Small groups of supernatural creatures, not hostile, living in homes with a guardian. It never got past the planning because we couldn't trust the supernatural creatures or the host of the houses..."
"So...?" Ben questioned.
"So I think we may give this a shot again. I'm the lead for finding new supernatural creatures and the head of special projects."
Ben's excitement grew. "Wait really? You will really let me do this?"
Maya smiled. "Why not? I'm not a monster. Not offense." She said to Flori and Fee. "We will give this a go. I'll need all your information."
Ben was more than willing to do anything. "Sure sure. So what now?"
"Now we plan for it. People will be here tomorrow to start planning out the house and rebuilding. We are going to multiply the rooms in this house.
Ben halted in his tracks. "Wait what? Aren't we making rooms for Fee and Flori?"
Agent Maya looked at him amused.
"You think I'm gonna redesign this house for just the three of you? Ha no!"
"Well how many roommates am I hosting?" Ben asked.
"Seven."
Ben didn't think he heard that right. "S-seven? Did you say seven?"
"Yes. I have five more potential supernaturals that would be excellent for this project. Your job will be to keep them in line and safe. Got it?"
Benjamin suddenly felt like a lot of pressure was on him. He asked for this and now it was happening. "Got it."
Maya Yamin walked to the table with her papers and gathered them up. She put them in the folder and took it. She walked to the door and opened it.
"Benjamin Parker..." She stopped before leaving. "...don't make me regret this."
Ben stood up straight and looked her in the eyes. "I will take care of them."
The agent nodded her approval. "I will be emailing you daily for updates and it is always open for questions."
"Okay thank you." Ben walked to the door and held it open as he watched a black SUV pull up. A guy stepped out and opened a door for Agent Maya Yamin.
"Hey Agent Maya!" Ben called to her.
She turned a look at him.
"You didn't really have a team ready to come in, did you?"
The beautiful brown woman smiled. She waved her hand in the air once. Ben suddenly felt a sharp cold on the back of his neck followed with the sound of a click. He was familiar with that sound after seeing countless movies. It was the cocking of a gun. Ben didn't dare to move. He just stared ahead at Maya.
She waved a hand again. The cold steel on his neck disappeared. She stepped into the car and it drove off.
Ben spun around quickly and there was no one there.
"Holy shit."
- COMMENTS
GrantLeeStone3 months agoThis is a good premise. It feels a little rushed. Have you set up Benjamin to have a “Harem” of seven monster and/or alien roommates? Maya is a gun-witch. And Ms. Gia is more than she appears, maybe a Gypsy or Baba Yaga. Of course, I want Ben to fuck them both. I’m surprised there was not a threesome scene between Fiori, Fee and Ben. How did Fiori get to be 333 years old and not run into DOSA before this?
Here is a suggestion. Have one of the Seven Monsters be either a bisexual male, or a bisexual futanari/intersex monster. This could be a shapeshifter monster that can be male, female or intersex by choice. You also need some bisexual female monsters. Ben can’t keep up with the sexual needs of seven straight female monsters. There’s just not enough of him to go around. I would also like to see some homoerotic action. But, that’s me.
What if two of the monsters are identical incestuous twins: Male and Female! Androgynous. Identical (except for gender), and Wood Elves or Dark Elves?
What is your first language? You are using a good translator program. But some of your spellings and idioms are off. It’s a “Birth Certificate,” not a “birthday certificate.”
I would like to see a sex scene between Fiori and Fee. Would Ben be jealous?
Finally, stop having Ben lie. He is bad at it. It makes him appear incredibly pathetic and weak. Having him beat and be cruel to Fee (even if she “likes” it) is also a turn-off for me. That can easily go too far.
You have picked up elements of other winning series on Literotica. There is a bit of this and a bit of that. I think you have a winning combination. I made you a Favorite Author, so I can keep an eye on this series.
Anonymous3 months agoThis MC is a bit of a beta and a simp. Who willingly invites the feds into your personal home and lives and have them run roughshod over everything that is yours. Why would the vampire being older than the republic not have the means and wherewithal to anticipate possible government intervention and not have the means to counteract it. This entire premise of housing intelligent beings for there own good against there will seems akin to a bit of slavery or prison institutionalism, or Nazi incarceration of the jews.
derGaertnerabout 1 year agowhere bought in the mall - after Ben's concussion he got home with the EMTs - the car was still at the mall. How come that the black curtains appear suddenly at home?
Vorstenabout 1 year agoHit the wrong star when rating.
Anyway pretty good. Just a few typos and such.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI am loving the characters and how you are showing how their relationships develop and how they need to learn to live together. I already knew there would be the involvement of a "government" department when you opened the story with a D.O.S.A. Report line. What I am asking is Please don't bring us to a "locked up in a facility with no hope of escape" ending for the "monsters". However you decide to end this story in regards to Ben, I want there to be a better ending for his roommates where they don't end up eternally under government control or lockup.
