- Loving Wives
- My Sales Rep
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Click hereNeither Arturo nor Bob were young studs and they were spent. Fay felt oddly disappointed that her sexual adventure was over.
As he zipped up, Bob told Fay to send him a proposal and the deal was hers. That was Arturo's doing, having shared Fay's work product previously with Bob.
There was really nothing more to discuss, so Bob said his goodbyes and left. Arturo begged Fay to spend the night, but Fay was anxious to get home and had plenty time to get to the airport. Arturo gallantly offered to drive her, but she was ready to be alone with her very complicated feelings and thoughts.
My phone rang.
- COMMENTS
Xamphosalmost 15 years agoI like the hesitance, but I am disappointed when her big moment came the husband was not there to watch, nor enjoy further.
Maybe a little more persuasion perhaps a striptease in the office before the men got their pleasures.
I think from the ending there will be more sales opportunities this time in front of an audience.
Don2Duskalmost 15 years agoAuthorThanks for using your handle. Your profile does not allow feedback. Why is that? I was able to read your posted story and it sheds some light on your viewpoint. I won't criticize it, and I hope it's not autobiographical. Sorry!
Don2Duskalmost 15 years agoAuthorWrite what you wish, it doesn't offend me. It's just a story: fiction. So far, STD's haven't penetrated this form. I'm not a perfect writer and I will make errors. At some point, I will delete some anonymous, negative feedback. If the commenter needs to hide behind anonymity, then I can't take their comments very seriously.
I do like constructive criticism and I have a thick skin.
My goal is two fold: to please myself by writing and to entertain others who have a taste for the subject.
Thanks for your time.
