My Secret Admirer Ch. 03

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"See, the bitch likes it in the ass. We'll see how she likes this." And two more fingers violated me even more forcefully than the first. I squirmed away from those fingers, but to no avail. His grip was too strong. I thought I was going to pass out from the pain, and I would have welcomed that.

Finally, after several minutes and several more hands and fingers violating me and practically pulling my nipples off my body, one of them said, "Fuck this. Let's get back to our pool game. This puny little bitch isn't worth our time." And someone slammed the trunk lid.

The lid opened again, Josh's voice, "Are you okay?"

"Yes, Sir." I managed. And the lid closed again.

The car started moving again, and for quite some time. Finally it stopped again. I hoped we were back in their garage, but I didn't hear the echo of the engine like I would have if the car was in a garage.

Doors on both sides of the car opened and then slammed shut. The trunk lid opened again and my sister said, "Get your ass out here." When I was out of the trunk and standing, I felt a tug on the leash. There was cool grass under my feet, and I was thankful for that. They were still sore and concrete or asphalt would have scraped them even more.

We'd been walking for quite a while, fifteen minutes or so, with one of them constantly jerking on the leash to make me keep up their rather quick pace when I heard both of them, almost simultaneously say, "Fuck!"

Becky whispered to me, "It's the fucking cops. You just play it cool and we'll see if we can get out of this without going to jail."

"Hi, officers." Josh said in a voice that was way too cherry for the situation.

A voice of authority asked, "Do you mind telling us what the fuck is going on here?"

"We're just out for a stroll, Sir."

"Uh huh, well then explain her, and you'd better lose that smug, smart-ass tone or you'll all be in jail before you can swallow your spit."

"Yes, Sir. I'm sorry, Sir." Josh submitted to the officer. "I . . . she lost a bet on the game. She's my sister, and she was stupid enough to bet on the Jets. My wife and I are just collecting on the bet . . . Sir."

"Hum, is that so? Well, the two of you need to go with my partner so that I can have a private chat with your sister."

After ten seconds or so, the officer asked me, "Is he telling the truth, Ma'am. Are you okay with what's going on here?"

"Yes, Sir. It was a harmless bet. I just knew the Jets would win—that's all. Where are we, anyway?"

"You're in Randville Park, Ma'am. So everything is alright with you? It's okay, you can tell me the truth. They can't hear you. They don't have something over you right now, do they, a friend or family member they promise to hurt if you tell us the truth?"

"No, Sir. If that was the case I'd tell you for sure, but it's nothing like that. I'm just paying off a stupid bet."

"Okay then. I should arrest you for indecent exposure or at least give you a ticket, but it's late and there's no one around, so I guess it's a case of 'no harm, no foul'. What is your name?

"Dallas Marshall, Sir."

"And your address?"

"1523 Cleveland Circle here in town."

"And your social?"

After I gave it to him, he said, "I will have your brother show us his car so we can get the license number, and we'll record their ID info as well. If anything happens to you, they will answer to me, and I'll make damn sure they understand that. Otherwise, it's nice to know that some people actually pay their gambling debts. Oh, and how could you be so stupid as to bet on the fucking Jets?"

He'd said that last part with a humors chuckle, so I just shrugged.

I stood there for another five minutes before my leash was tugged on again and we resumed our walk.

I must admit, being led around a public park totally naked and blindfolded was erotic and exhilarating. It didn't make me horny, but it was strangely erotic. I liked it.

* * *

Two days later, when it was time for me to go home, I was sad, and I could tell my brother and sister were sad as well. The week had been great fun.

I did have my doubts that the "bikers" were really random people Josh lured out of a biker bar to his car. I couldn't even picture him going into one of those places. I also had my doubts about the cops. They never even had me remove my sleeping mask. But Josh and Becky would neither confirm nor deny my suspicion. I guess leaving it that way makes for a better memory for all three of us.

* * *

The End

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Started out ok

The story started out well but the part about the slave spoiled it.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
Disapointing

Disapointing to say the least, I have to agree with the others your first chapter was fantastic, 2nd not too bad, but this one I couldn't give a higher rating than three stars and that's only because it's well written, the story content sucked because there was too much pain involved.

You are a much better writer than this, even reading this I felt degraded by the things that were done to her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A little carried away with the slave fantasy?

Partially agree with the other comments. This is a very good series, but maybe this episode lost it's humanity a bit. It certainly wasn't 'rubbish', though. I hope you aren't too discouraged, and that you can produce another episode without it just racking up the slave humiliation thing: There was just a little too much cruelty for too long in this one. I understand the importance of the slave fantasy idea for Dallas, but we lost the intimacy a bit in pushing the BDSM angle. The great thing with these kind of games is the trust and dependence aspect - there was no real coming together after the guests had gone and the bikers and trunk thing was un-necessary and a bit gratuitous, although the cop episode was better. Having the brother ask 'are you OK?' isn't really enough to keep us focussed on the intimacy of such enforced vulnerability. Whilst we didn't need a big post-mortem with everyone talking about their feelings, it would have been nice not to just send her off home after all that. Perhaps you can address this in a 4th episode? I hope you keep writing with these characters, but please show Dallas a little love!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What a pity

After promising first part, second was rushed and third was plain rubbish... Waste of anyone's time...

saunassaunasover 9 years ago

The first part was good but after it it wasn't erotic any more. It was dirty plain sex = bullshit. Sorry but this is my opinion.

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