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I put my forehead to hers and said to her directly, "Nothing's too good for the most beautiful, fully grown woman in the world."
Marisa giggled and gazed into my eyes. Hoo boy. This was something powerful. I felt my heart soar as my penis awakened to semi-hardness. My daughter was straddling me in my lap and looking at me with utter adoration. And I looked back at her the same way. Oh my God, Karen was so right!! How stupid had I been not to see this!
"Now there's that million-dollar smile I wanted to see!" I grinned. "So are we feeling a little cheered up then?"
She giggled again. "Yes, Daddy." She was glowing and her eyes sparkled.
I put on more of an impish grin, and gently dug my fingers just below her ribs. She chuckled. I did it again a little higher and a little harder. She squealed in laughter and grabbed my wrists. Then I really went for it, digging my fingers into her ribs, tickling her armpits, the insides of her elbows, dancing my fingers across her belly, up her spine to the base of her neck. She screamed and howled in peals of laughter, wriggling and struggling, shifting and bouncing. My cock was more or less fully erect now and throbbing. She was so beautiful, so adorable! She was grinding and rubbing her crotch all over the bulge in my pants. My eyes widened when I noticed her nipples were erect and poking through her shirt. This was perfect! This was magical!! My gorgeous daughter was gasping out, "No!! Stop it!! Please!!" in between screams and roars of laughter, leaning back with her head thrown back, her mouth wide open and eyes shut tight. I swear I could feel the rising heat from her cunt through her jeans, radiating out and overwhelming my groin. My cock was rock hard now, pulsing with steel passion in my pants. This was it! Over come with love and lust for my delicious daughter, I leaned in to start nibbling on her neck and earlobes...
...When the doorbell rang. Marisa and I both stopped, sat upright, and looked towards the door. She quickly looked back into my eyes, her mouth open and panting, her cheeks flushed, strands of her hair hanging in her face. Her nipples strained like knife-points against her T-shirt, threatening to poke right through. She quickly kissed me on the lips, hopped off me, grabbed the flowers and headed for the stairs.
"I love you Daddy!!!" she sang out as she ran upstairs.
Shit.
The doorbell rang again.
Muttering to myself, I got up and headed to the door. Opening it and concealing my rigid erection behind it, I saw the face of Celia, one of our neighbours.
"Hi! I'm just here to drop off some baby things. Karen said she knew someone who had a use for them. I've got to run!" she said quickly, thrusting a plastic tub filled with all sorts of colourful plastic and cloth items into my arms. "Say hi to Karen and Marisa for me! Bye!"
Celia ran off and hopped back into her car. I closed the door and heard the sound of the shower upstairs.
I opened the refrigerator and grabbed a beer. I sat down and opened it as my erection began to wane.
...to be continued.
- COMMENTS
bigdaddyg123over 2 years ago"My Sister and My Daughter:" - Thirty-eight Year Old Divorced Brother, Unnamed and Thirty-seven Year Old Single Virile Sister, Karen and His Eighteen Year Old Virgin Daughter/Niece, Marisa.
Had the event of performing waste-dumping anal on his sister, Karen, I would probably continue reading--until I came to the warning of the unfinished Chapter 08 (as stated by several reader's comments) and the "possibility" of eighteen (18) year old, adolescent virgin daughter being finally fucked (and hopefully, impregnated) by her unnamed father, I would continue reading.
Being thus far disappointed by unnamed father not yet making any serious advances toward daughter Marisa, and unnamed father/brother, shit-chute fucking--his now twenty (20) year affair with--his sister, I would continue reading.
The theme and plot, the characters and their dialogue, and their roles, are all well orchestrated. The writing is better than most; although the back-story, back ground of brother and sister, Karen and her brother could have been better addressed. I'm off to peruse any other incest genre stories of this writer 'RabbitPrince', I'll "Follow Author" in the event he eventually--hopefully--finishes this story; he's still posting other stories as of a couple years ago, so this story could easily have been completed.
Anonymousover 10 years agoFive stars,looks like the story is building nicely! A few things that seemed odd or I didn't like but kind of moot since you've written pretty far ahead or finished the story by now...but what the heck;
'Fully grown woman in the world' ...just sounded kind of...odd? Sounded more like a comment he is making to someone about a third person. No biggie, just odd.
If you never use the word 'glans' again I would be happy, heh. Seems very clinical and unpleasant in the otherwise terrific action scenes:)
The bit where he's fucking her hard and banging her cervix. Hmm, I guess different strokes, but I've never had a woman be anything but in discomfort or outright pain when Im hitting her cervix. Ouch! ...and the g spot thing! Unless I didnt quite the position he was fucking her in, kinda hard to hit that spot with your dick unless its curved like a J or you have one hellova angle to reach up instead of in, lol!
Anyway, done with the fun nitpicking. Youre doing a great job of building the story line! Love the sis taking charge to help us retarded males figure out the plot in life that we would otherwise miss! Gawd we can be obtuse
Anonymousalmost 11 years agohave to admit, this story is just amazing, I read it for 2nd time already still awesome!
you have done some great work here!
