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That concludes the first chapter of the story. The next chapter is going to be about the challenges they face as a couple who live a taboo life. Please feel free to comment and your comments are highly appreciated. Also don't forget to vote for my story. Thank you for your valuable time. Love.- AngieSteve69
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoPlease continue this this was very well written you should feel proud for what you have made
Anonymousover 7 years agoThe true love and honest emotions come through in this story. Many sons think Mama is the kindest, smartest, most courageous and most beautiful woman. The impression mama's aroma and hairy pussy make on Ben is very powerful.
Anonymousover 7 years agoWell written, conceptually well thought of, a bit of flaws here and there, but I wouldn't delve on that too much, coz I have my dick almost shredding my jockeys to pieces (like you said). All in all 5 out of 5
thecarolinadreamerover 7 years agoAssuming English isn't your first language, you've done really good. One suggestion, however, since you are posting in Literotica, most of your readers expect a new paragraph to begin EVERY time a new character starts to speak. Not conforming to that really pulls the reader out of your story.
Thanks for the read!
