How was your first time?" she asks.
I'm breathless and cannot answer. I only nod my head with a dopey, dreamy look upon my face.
"Shall we go shower again?" she asks, kissing my cheek.
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Beautiful innocent story
Good writing, good characters, nice change of style between mess room chat and vivid description. Look forward to more.
Thank you to all that have read this.
It means a lot to me to have 19K people viewing or reading a story I have written. Ah, and she was a wonderful girl. Really made an impression on me, even years later. So, thanks again to those that have read and those that will. Please, feel free to comment.more...
Great story!++
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