"They were so nice," Amanda says. "I hope they call. They'll be fun to get to know a little better."
"I think Martin would love to get to know you better, that's for sure," I chuckle.
"Do you blame him?" she asks in mock arrogance.
I look over her body like I always do and shake my head. "Not one bit."
"How about that Ginny, though?" Amanda says and sighs sharply at the memory of her dangerous curves.
I nod in agreement. "I wouldn't mind getting to know her a little better," I say.
"Could you imagine the craziness if we hooked up with them and included Dana as well?"
"I can tell you right now, Martin and I would be on cloud nine with the three of you perfect ladies," I say and she laughs and then kisses me. She slips in a little tongue and I swerve on the freeway slightly. "Not now, babe," I say, laughing. "I'd rather not kill us on the drive home."
She laughs and we continue to talk about our new friends and fantasize about them. When we pull up to the house that Sunday afternoon, the house is suspiciously quiet. Dana isn't home, but we expect her to come and go as she pleases. However, the kids' cars are both parked outside. I fight to keep my mind from remembering my nightmare this morning.
"Where is everybody?" I wonder out loud.
"Well, it's Sunday afternoon, the kids are probably sleeping still. Especially if they celebrated after the play last night," Amanda says as she taps out a text message on her phone; I assume to Dana.
A few seconds later it chimes back. "Dana's grocery shopping. She doesn't need to do that."
I shrug. "She's staying here for free, she probably feels like she should pitch in a little," I reason.
"True. I'll go wake Tina, you get Tim, maybe the five of us can go get lunch when Dana gets back," Amanda suggests and I agree, leading her up the stairs.
I knock on Tim's door and quietly enter while Amanda does the same at Tina's door. Tim's not in his bed, so I assume with track approaching, he's out for a short run. When I turn around I see Amanda standing completely still.
"Honey, what's wrong?" I ask as I walk up. Her mouth is hanging open and her eyes are wide in shock.
I turn and see what has her completely petrified: our children are fast asleep in Tina's bed, completely naked. Amanda's been right all along...
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Next time they go for a bit of away time
so they can enjoy some privacy, maybe they should stay at a hotel with better sound proofing. lol
haha
Luckily I have a sense of humor. I like how you poked fun at my comment there. :)
The weekend away was a great......
....collection of images. The nightmare was chilling, I hope not prophetic. Perhaps they've found phriends phor phuture phun in the couple from the next room?
Well written and presented. While there are elements of this series I would prefer you didn't include (who doesn't have preferences?), this is one of few stories I've encountered lately that so engages me that any technical issues that may exist are completely missed for the story and the characters.
When is Dana going sign cohabitation agreements with them and get pregnant? She obviously wants to....
Now the storyline with the twins was not unexpected, but how they (you) handle it should be interesting.more...
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I delete what is non-constructive. You're entitled to your opinion, fine, at least you were respectful. I only delete the ones where the commenter 1) can't write out a full thought, 2) is an asshole, 3) obviously hasn't read the whole series and 4) criticizes my writing when they can't use proper spelling, grammar or punctuation. Other than that, I've left negative comments up before and have learned from them. So, as long as the commenter isn't being a douche talking out of their ass, I either take what they have into consideration or ignore them; which is my right to do, as you say. Thanks for your input though; I'm sorry it didn't live up to your expectations.more...
It's interesting that the comments seem to be about other comments
And not the story. And it seems like the negative comments have been deleted. Which is the authors right to do. But it does make for interesting guesswork about what those comments were all about. It feels like the commentators were upset that some people didn't like this story. Which always makes me smile. People are always going to like some things and hate other things. The fact that some commentators think their opinions are the only valid ones is ludicrous. And who cares? Let the authors delete whatever. Don't allow comments. But why would you read a story only to blast someone Anons opinion? That's the height of stupidity. Anyway, I didn't like this story. Plain and simple I found it to be poorly written, populated by cardboard characters whose actions made no sense. It was neither erotic, interesting or entertaining. Just one persons opinion. Feel free to delete it.more...
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