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I stood on the deck, helping to welcome the passengers aboard. There were some gorgeous women coming on board, many of them with husbands, so they were off limits to me (I knew I'd never be able to do to some other husband what Vic had done to me. But there were plenty of singletons. And if Debrah's betrayal of me was still too raw to indulge, there would be other cruises that I'd work on.
Both Debrah and Mandy had sent me cards. Debrah to wish me bon voyage, Mandy to tell me she had finally kicked Vic out and was suing him for divorce.
Life goes on.
- COMMENTS
ImNotanAnon3 months agoRe-reading your stories after a period of time helps me to realize that you're just not that good if a writer.
oldtwit7 months agoSomeone below said "just ends with a sputtering wheeze. " I agree BUT that's how most betrayal ends, so for me a good story.
Senserble plot, character set ok.
Anonymous8 months agoClear plot, well define characters.
The editing was poor. I expect most readers felt it was as if the author got bored and quit.
Matt, we expect so much more from you.
The Hoary Cleric
shadracht8 months agoUnsatisfying to the Nth degree. The whole thing just ends with a sputtering wheeze, and was not in any way enjoyable. If this isn't to entertain, what is the point?
