Naked Planet Ch. 01

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"Leave him, it's too late!" shouted Wade in her ear over the alarm. "The fire suppression system's gone!"

"What the hell happened?!" Gwen demanded.

"I don't know! Maybe we hit something... an asteroid, or an ion storm!"

"It doesn't make any sense..."

"Whatever it was," said Wade, "it ignited half our oxygen tanks... and now the main reactor's gone into meltdown! The ship's coming apart—we gotta get off now!"

Whatever mixed feelings Gwen had about Ellison and what happened between them, he was still her commander, and her every urge told her to try to rescue him, no matter how slim the odds that he was still alive. But Wade was right; the Tempest was gone, and if they didn't hurry, they would be too. She dropped the extinguisher.

"What about Alpha Team?" she asked. "They're on—"

Wade shook his head violently. "Forget it! They're on the starboard side of the ship—it's too far! We have to get to the other shuttle! This way!"

He took her hand and they fled. Gwen pulled away as she quickly outpaced Wade, shrieking and dodging as secondary blasts hurled shrapnel in an apparent bid to thwart their escape. They sprinted within seconds to the port airlock connected to Shuttle One. She saw no one along their way; she hoped the others had found a way to escape.

The two practically crashed into their seats, frantically flipping switches and mashing buttons as they scrambled to undock the shuttle and start its engines. The cabin was cramped, designed to carry up to six but not wasting any space for comfort. The computer beeped various warnings at them, insisting that the launch checklist procedures were not complete. Wade impatiently pulled the overhead emergency override, and the reactor rumbled to life. The floor panels quaked ominously as the explosions outside neared.

"I'm plotting the autopilot landing coordinates for Prosperity!" she announced.

"Later, Gwen!" screamed Wade. "Just put some distance between us and the ship!"

The shuttle lurched as it decoupled from the Tempest. The chaos outside the hatch went silent. She belatedly buckled herself into her seat as they thrusted away, the grainy image in the center console display zooming out to reveal their dying ship. Charred black fissures were all that remained of the main engines. Debris flaked away from the hull as little explosions rippled along her side. Then, a blinding burst of light split a lengthwise seam in the ship. A moment later, the entire vessel disintegrated.

They stared in awe at the spectacle, wondering what could have caused such destruction. Their amazement, however, was cut short by the massive shockwave buffeting their shuttle. Gwen screamed as they went into a violent spin along their reentry trajectory. Panicked alarms went off inside the cabin, and she looked over, straining against her harness and dizziness growing, to glimpse Wade tapping vainly at the controls.

The g-force was becoming unbearable now. The windshield framed Inanna, a blue-green sphere resembling an Earth with scrambled continents, spiraling wildly as it gradually filled her view. As Gwen began to black out, a final thought entered her mind:

This was not at all how she imagined her first day out of hibernation.

TO BE CONTINUED

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

love it, hope there will be soon more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good Lord

What an awesome Story!

HexPatternHexPatternalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks! I'm a little surprised (at least two) female readers are enjoying this--I'm a guy indulging his sci-fi porn fantasies--but I'm glad you like it.

Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

NaughtyIrishGirlNaughtyIrishGirlalmost 4 years ago

Another female Sci-Fi fan here. I'm L-O-V-I-N-G this first chapter. Looking forward to starting the second. I love the details and the descriptiveness of this, and the pacing of the story is excellent. The degradation scene was amazing! Easiest five starts I've given a story in a long time.

HexPatternHexPatternalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the positive feedback!

I'm glad you're enjoying it; I tried to write the kind of fiction I've always wanted to read, if that makes any sense. And I know what you mean about our heroine--I love telling the explicit, non-consensual aspects of her story, but I try to balance it out by portraying her as smart and likable. I just think the sex and humiliation is so much hotter when it's happening to a strong and interesting woman.

Anyway, bear with me as I grind through the upcoming chapters; I'm always trying to improve my writing, so feel free to offer any other feedback or suggestions you think might make the reading experience better!

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