Nature's Call - First Time

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The sun was setting when the four of them - exhausted and sexually satisfied - parted company at the employee cabins. Erica had kissed John and told him how nice he had made her introduction to sex. He had smiled and hinted that it was even better in a bed and that he was more than willing to see her again. The diffuse ache between her legs told Erica that it was going to be a few days, perhaps a week, before she was able or willing to jump at that opportunity. She was comfortable in the knowledge though that when she was recovered and ready, she would come calling again...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Some hymens do stretch . . .

but it did seem to be made of super-elastic before breaking. In general, I agree with the other commenters on this, but, there is medical testimony that some women have such thick and stretchable hymens that they can be very sexually experienced --even have multiple partners--before the hymen is penetrated. Meanwhile, other girls lose their hymens from horseback riding, gymnastics, etc. at a young age and long before they have coitus.

That's why using an intact hymen as a "test of virginity" is so ridiculous.

I agree with H.H. Morant that the heroine's soreness at the end was a realistic plus to the story. My major objection is that it wasn't very sexually arousing.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
Thanks H.H.

If you want to see a Hymen go to df6.org there are many to pick from but All will show that it's just inside the Vagina all you have to do is peel the lips back.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 9 years ago
Gave it 5 stars WAY too quickly

I got interrupted just before the defloration scene; came back, saw that they'd done the deed and Erica was sore. That was a definite plus. Upon rereading I saw that this is another case of the grossly misplaced hymen. The story would be a 3 on a do-over

"Averygoodlay" seems to be as distressed about this ignorance/laziness/bondage to a tradition of bad writing as I am

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
Jumped from 4 to a 3

Very good story up until the breaking of her Hymen with already a few inches in her it should have already been broken, I know I bitch about this too much but it takes away from the story when you don't know where the hymen is.

twistedgraygoattwistedgraygoatover 9 years ago
Fun story, but ...

Fun story, but be sure to reread before submitting for grammar.

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