Negative Space Ch. 03

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"Oh Theo, where did you find her? She's fantastic. I truly miss hearing someone scold you like that." She laughed harder, stopping only to lean her face into Lux when a contraction came. We waited for it to pass, and she looked back at me.

"We drink human blood. Usually we have a stash of donated blood in the house, but since we only just moved here, we are completely out."

I didn't give myself a chance to think about it, but simply blurted out, "You can drink from me, so long as it won't turn me into a vampire, and you don't kill me." Immediately all four of the vampires turned to stare at me, incredulous.

"No, it won't turn you into a vampire," Inga said, pausing. I took advantage of her break and stepped forward, leaning over her with my neck bared.

"Wait," Inga said, pushing me far enough away to look into my eyes, "Are you sure you want to do this? I can send one of the others out to get something for me. It won't take too long."

"Yes I'm sure. We need to get this all taken care of so that I can examine you and make sure this baby is healthy. I don't want to wait any longer." I leaned forward, and heard all four of the vampires in the room breathing in. Inga licked my neck, and I immediately felt a rush of energy and attraction. I felt first her cool lips, then a sharp pain, but it dissipated immediately, an overwhelming pleasure filling me instead. I felt my blood rushing out into her mouth and I gasped, panting heavily as my whole body tightened and burned with desire. I felt my panties get wet and wanted nothing more than to press my fingers into my pussy, to feel something inside of me. Inga pulled back, licking my neck and sealing the holes, and I almost grabbed her to force her to continue. I closed my eyes, knowing that everyone in the room was watching me, knowing what I was feeling.

"What an experience," I said lightly.

"Yes, I am sorry about that bit," Inga said, smiling.

"Well I'm not! That was amazing!" I grinned at her, "How are you feeling?"

"Definitely better."

"Okay. Then I'm going to examine you, if I can?" Inga nodded and closed her eyes as another contraction rushed through her body. I pulled on the gloves and when she was ready I checked her dilation.

"So your amniotic sac has not broken, which is good, and you're actually at about.... hmmm, six centimeters dilation." Inga looked at me confused.

"Do you have any idea how labor works?" I asked. She shook her head. "Okay. Let me explain." I told her everything, as Lux and I helped her back onto her hands and knees where she was much more comfortable. I had Lux keep massaging her, and I helped her to breathe through contractions while I explained to her why she was feeling the way she was, what was happening in her body, and why 6 cms meant that she was already halfway done. After about an hour of massaging and coaching, I stood up to find the bathroom. When I found it I saw there was a huge, deep jacuzzi in it. I leaned over and turned on the hot water, filling it up. I went back to Inga, explaining to her that she could get in the tub and it could really help her loosen up. She agreed quickly, and we helped her into the bathroom. She took off her clothing and stepped in. Immediately as she sat down I saw the muscles in her shoulders and her thighs relax, she closed her eyes and smiled a bit.

"Yes, you're right. This is perfect." I had Lux strip down to his underwear and get in with her, sitting behind her so she could relax onto him. He blushed, and I saw his sweet boyish smile for the first time. In the tub together it was clear how dearly he loved her, and how pleased he was to have something to do to help her.

"Okay folks. I'm going to step out now, but if you need anything, and really, I mean anything, you just call me. Inga, if you feel like you need to push, you call me right away."

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The writing is excellent. Unfortunately- your protagonist’s reactions are completely unnatural. “You are a vampire? Okay you can feed from me then.” Bullshit. And the ignorance of the vampires is beyond stupid. A pregnant vampire wouldn’t have researched what to expect and how to give birth? It’s weird how you write that opening on the subway so brilliantly but can’t do typical human reactions. Otaaaay. The Doctor business is kinda weird too - sorry but no one treats Lyme disease “1st with no investigation. Lyme disease is (unfortunately) the unknown one that’s last diagnosed - although admittedly it’s better documented now and more easily diagnosed - it’s still never “1st.” But it’s your circus and your monkey.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I was thinking this was a werewolf story and here I am with vamps! I like it so far, just not really sure I like the idea of vamps having babies...

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 11 years ago
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Am personally kicking my own ass for dodging this story!

eugene2keugene2kabout 11 years ago

Very good writing style, and the beginning where you started with the subway impression - that was just awesome! However, the protagonist's eagerness to give their neck to a vamp they met not five minutes ago trusting that vampire not to kill her or harm her - whether intentionally or not - seems rather unnatural. So if there's nothing that could explain this behavior in future chapters, I suppose you didn't put yourself into the character's shoes well enough in this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

very good chapter

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